The wrath of God and Our Nation
A Spiritual Patriotic Poem7 total reviews
Comment from babykoala
A very strong and powerful peice and I could feel the passion in the words. The imagery is very striking and it also felt very empowering..it felt like a march in my head as I was reading it. A spiritual march gaining momentum.xx
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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A very strong and powerful peice and I could feel the passion in the words. The imagery is very striking and it also felt very empowering..it felt like a march in my head as I was reading it. A spiritual march gaining momentum.xx
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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This whole world needs a lot more empowering that is for sure, hopefully my words in some small way do that to people. It is so good to hear from you and always happy when you write. Take care.
Larry
Comment from WryWriter
A powerful message within these lines. I do agree that America is under attack from within and without. A battle that God will decide. One question: Did you mean fueled? "fuled by hated, anger and sin."
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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A powerful message within these lines. I do agree that America is under attack from within and without. A battle that God will decide. One question: Did you mean fueled? "fuled by hated, anger and sin."
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thanks WryWriter for the great review and 5 stars. I probably messed up on that spelling, thanks for pointing that out I will correct it for sure. Take care.
Larry
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you, Larry. It is a bold stand you take here and I'm sure you received some flack for it. If not, you will. I appreciate many things about our president, mainly that he is pro life. The abortion machine sickens me, and I am in involved in pro life causes dear to my heart. I am not for socialism, or open borders, either, as you know. If the godless liberals get in office, we really will decline as a nation quickly. I pray for him and our nation daily.
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Larry. It is a bold stand you take here and I'm sure you received some flack for it. If not, you will. I appreciate many things about our president, mainly that he is pro life. The abortion machine sickens me, and I am in involved in pro life causes dear to my heart. I am not for socialism, or open borders, either, as you know. If the godless liberals get in office, we really will decline as a nation quickly. I pray for him and our nation daily.
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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That is Excellent Sally So glad you stand firm on many things, much like I do. I appreciate the great review and the 5 stars that really means allot. Always feel free to read my other works if you like. Between Spiritual, patriotic, Romance, friendships and other odds and ends there is something for most anybody.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It is such a pleasure to read real common sense statements and to have those statements so elegantly portrayed and so artfully said. Your post notes are eloquent and I agree wholeheartedly with your opinion. Just let us hope that God does not decide to withdraw His Hand because of the lack of lawful and righteous decisions of some less thoughtful persons. Enjoyed reading your poem!
Check the word in first stanza I believe you meant fueled.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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It is such a pleasure to read real common sense statements and to have those statements so elegantly portrayed and so artfully said. Your post notes are eloquent and I agree wholeheartedly with your opinion. Just let us hope that God does not decide to withdraw His Hand because of the lack of lawful and righteous decisions of some less thoughtful persons. Enjoyed reading your poem!
Check the word in first stanza I believe you meant fueled.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you Raffaelina for your very great review. I am glad we see eye to eye on these things. I will be checking more of your work out as well. Off subject but your picture is only displaying on a small portion of that circle you may want to fix that?
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I'm not very good at that sort of thing, but I will try.
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Was you trying to put a picture of your self or what?
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Yes
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Is your picture a regular pic shows your face for sure and maybe farther down then that?
Comment from GentleWind
You are exactly right. Loved and respected the theme of the piece and it flowed well. May God forgive those who do not stand for righteousness. Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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You are exactly right. Loved and respected the theme of the piece and it flowed well. May God forgive those who do not stand for righteousness. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your nice review and the 5 stars it is much appreciated. Take care.
Larry
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We in the west have a common enemy and these attacks are meant to provoke and cause war, it is a pity that such strife is out there, but making peace with fanatics is impossible, your poem champions faith and hope and courage, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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We in the west have a common enemy and these attacks are meant to provoke and cause war, it is a pity that such strife is out there, but making peace with fanatics is impossible, your poem champions faith and hope and courage, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you Dolly it is so nice to hear from you and your nice review. Take care and have a great day.
Larry
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Larry: I too have some questions about Donald Trump, but I believe he is a man for the time that we are in. I believe that God ordains all government for His reasons. Pres. Trump has done some things for this country that are extremely positive. I will not disagree with you. -Robert-
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Hi Larry: I too have some questions about Donald Trump, but I believe he is a man for the time that we are in. I believe that God ordains all government for His reasons. Pres. Trump has done some things for this country that are extremely positive. I will not disagree with you. -Robert-
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you Robert for the kind words. and 5 stars it is much appreciated The best to you always.
Larry
