haiku (plush hydrangea)
haiku contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Val Crisson
I hope you do well in the haiku contest. Smile to how say--
Garden's pink cloud.
What got my attention the picture of the beautiful dark pink hydrangea . I never saw a pink one only blue.
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Hello Val Crisson
I hope you do well in the haiku contest. Smile to how say--
Garden's pink cloud.
What got my attention the picture of the beautiful dark pink hydrangea . I never saw a pink one only blue.
Gert
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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I have a yard full of pink ones, and I do love them. Thank you so much for the lovely review. Val
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You are so welcome Val Crisson
Gert
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Very nice choice of words, and I loved it a lot. I could read it over and over. Very interesting, too. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Very nice choice of words, and I loved it a lot. I could read it over and over. Very interesting, too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this lovely review. So glad you could "read it over and over" - haiku should do that .
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful Haiku and presentation, it does look like a pink cloud, very well presented an excellent poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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What a beautiful Haiku and presentation, it does look like a pink cloud, very well presented an excellent poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Val.
-You have written a
good haiku with a
proper syllable count and form.
-The description of the hydrangea
paints a vivid word picture.
-The satori line is very
good, and creates a good 'aha' moment.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation, Val.
-You have written a
good haiku with a
proper syllable count and form.
-The description of the hydrangea
paints a vivid word picture.
-The satori line is very
good, and creates a good 'aha' moment.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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Thank you for understanding haiku and the review.
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You are quite welcome. I appreciate the reply.
Comment from tfawcus
I'm glad you haven't tried to constrain this in the straitjacket of the 5-7-5 format - an artificial restriction that only approximates the intention of the Japanese form. Your description brings a vivid picture to mind that is not dependent on the image accompanying it. One of the more enjoyable entries to the is contest that I have read. I wish you luck with it.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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I'm glad you haven't tried to constrain this in the straitjacket of the 5-7-5 format - an artificial restriction that only approximates the intention of the Japanese form. Your description brings a vivid picture to mind that is not dependent on the image accompanying it. One of the more enjoyable entries to the is contest that I have read. I wish you luck with it.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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Thank you, I believe you have reviewed me before and we have the same feeling about haiku. I have been so saddened at what haiku has become on this site, but it makes me happy to hear someone out "there" gets it.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Who doesn't love hydrangeas? If I could have a real garden I'd have millions of them. I'm not an expert on haiku but I thought this was really sweet. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Who doesn't love hydrangeas? If I could have a real garden I'd have millions of them. I'm not an expert on haiku but I thought this was really sweet. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from Cybertron1986
Gorgeous wordplay. I love the comaparison of qualities that involve the sky and nature. Both beautiful and appropriate subjects that your haiku brings to life with a lively, vivid presentation of words and picture. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Gorgeous wordplay. I love the comaparison of qualities that involve the sky and nature. Both beautiful and appropriate subjects that your haiku brings to life with a lively, vivid presentation of words and picture. Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review. It was much appreciated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great haiku contest entry, Val. I enjoyed reading it. Your well-chosen words paint a great picture for readers. The picture included in a nice pairing, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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This is a great haiku contest entry, Val. I enjoyed reading it. Your well-chosen words paint a great picture for readers. The picture included in a nice pairing, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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thank you for the review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this nature Haiku, I love all flowers and this fluffy hydrangea is a vibrant pink, a beautiful presentation here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed this nature Haiku, I love all flowers and this fluffy hydrangea is a vibrant pink, a beautiful presentation here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Mark D. R.
delightful verse for your posting in this contest entry
colors and illustration complement nicely your Haiku verse
best of luck in the future voting
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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delightful verse for your posting in this contest entry
colors and illustration complement nicely your Haiku verse
best of luck in the future voting
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this lovely review.
