The Interview Part 2
Gunny16 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Now, I'm totally confused. Is the woman the spirit of his dead wife? Is their a child of theirs? I'll look for answers in the next installment. (Which I hope is soon.) 8-)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Now, I'm totally confused. Is the woman the spirit of his dead wife? Is their a child of theirs? I'll look for answers in the next installment. (Which I hope is soon.) 8-)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks for sticking with it, Yvonne.
Comment from Loren .
It is a fact that we so often get lost in our own thoughts and memories (not to mention hearing loss) that we don't always answer the questions asked. You always seem to be able to write, tongue-in-cheek, which always adds to the humor of your work. I also look for sometimes hidden messages. Loren
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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It is a fact that we so often get lost in our own thoughts and memories (not to mention hearing loss) that we don't always answer the questions asked. You always seem to be able to write, tongue-in-cheek, which always adds to the humor of your work. I also look for sometimes hidden messages. Loren
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Loren, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Well this is quite the twist. Dot is a spirit? I guess it would freak the kid out some. I still think Gunny is more there than he chooses to let on. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Well this is quite the twist. Dot is a spirit? I guess it would freak the kid out some. I still think Gunny is more there than he chooses to let on. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks, MA. At least one or two more scenes.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Lively, interestingly and a bit funny the scene is portrayed, realistic sentiment, with bewildering state introduced with wonder blended with surprising state of affairs punched; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Lively, interestingly and a bit funny the scene is portrayed, realistic sentiment, with bewildering state introduced with wonder blended with surprising state of affairs punched; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks, ALD.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Bill, your readers are wonder what happened to the kid, too. Seemingly, Gunny interview did not go well with the "kid" reporter. Did Gunny do anything to him?
Also, Dot, seemingly died very young at twenty.
I love the second portion of the scene where the two monologues are taking place. All in an effort to inform the readers (or should I say inform the audience given this is a script?)
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Bill, your readers are wonder what happened to the kid, too. Seemingly, Gunny interview did not go well with the "kid" reporter. Did Gunny do anything to him?
Also, Dot, seemingly died very young at twenty.
I love the second portion of the scene where the two monologues are taking place. All in an effort to inform the readers (or should I say inform the audience given this is a script?)
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks, PF, for giving this a look.
Comment from lyenochka
Um. So Dot is a ghost? If she died when she was in her 20's in the 1950's, who is the woman? Can any of the other people see her? And who's TJ? Their son?
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Um. So Dot is a ghost? If she died when she was in her 20's in the 1950's, who is the woman? Can any of the other people see her? And who's TJ? Their son?
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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I'm happy to generate questions which move us forward. To be continued.
