The Interview Part 2
Gunny16 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
It is sounding like Gunny's mind might wander every now and then but might remain solid as far as Dot, it is quite interesting now that a new character has been introduced****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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It is sounding like Gunny's mind might wander every now and then but might remain solid as far as Dot, it is quite interesting now that a new character has been introduced****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you for giving this a look.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Read them both. What a sad story. It happens a lot, especially if one is left alone for a long time, not even knowing if the other half is coming back. Well done, Bill. I was on holiday when you posted this story. Glad I found it. :)) Sandra x
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Read them both. What a sad story. It happens a lot, especially if one is left alone for a long time, not even knowing if the other half is coming back. Well done, Bill. I was on holiday when you posted this story. Glad I found it. :)) Sandra x
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, for the great review. Bill
Comment from brenda faye curtis
I decided to do review on parts 1 and 2 together, as the story does not flesh out until the second part. I think using a ghost character is a brilliant way of expanding exposition without the main character having to reveal too much to himself, only to the reader. It wasn't until Dot spoke that I began to understand Gunny. I look forward to future scenes.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I decided to do review on parts 1 and 2 together, as the story does not flesh out until the second part. I think using a ghost character is a brilliant way of expanding exposition without the main character having to reveal too much to himself, only to the reader. It wasn't until Dot spoke that I began to understand Gunny. I look forward to future scenes.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Brenda.
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from nomi338
Hey! I did not know this was going to turn into some kind of freaky circus. What gives? Is Dot alive or dead? Is Gunny alive or dead? Is Gunny just crazy as hell? Inquiring minds demand to be told.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hey! I did not know this was going to turn into some kind of freaky circus. What gives? Is Dot alive or dead? Is Gunny alive or dead? Is Gunny just crazy as hell? Inquiring minds demand to be told.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I?m still working on the finish. Dot is definitely deceased.
Comment from Rikki66
Poor Punny all that clear vision and he cannot see. Dot and Gunny have a good life even if no one else knows.
rikki:)*********************************
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Poor Punny all that clear vision and he cannot see. Dot and Gunny have a good life even if no one else knows.
rikki:)*********************************
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Rikki
Comment from Earl Corp
Ah... so the plot thickens, Dot is a ghost. Or is she a delusion in his advanced mind? I see this continued, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Ah... so the plot thickens, Dot is a ghost. Or is she a delusion in his advanced mind? I see this continued, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Earl.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, I had a feeling you'd do something like that to us, Sir Bill, and you did it so very masterfully -- love it! :) :) Now, I can't wait to learn 'the rest of story' (as Paul Harvey used to say..!). :) Thanx for sharing your imagination, sir! :) ;)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Yeah, I had a feeling you'd do something like that to us, Sir Bill, and you did it so very masterfully -- love it! :) :) Now, I can't wait to learn 'the rest of story' (as Paul Harvey used to say..!). :) Thanx for sharing your imagination, sir! :) ;)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Yvette, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from susand3022
Hi Bill, now I'm really curious... I need to know now what happened to his wife and son. Obviously, they're both gone... but how, and why? Can't wait to find out!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Hi Bill, now I'm really curious... I need to know now what happened to his wife and son. Obviously, they're both gone... but how, and why? Can't wait to find out!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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I will get that intervie2 rescheduled.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So Dot is a ghost. She and her son were BOTH killed? How tragic for Gunny! I guess next time you'll tell us how it happened. I don't think I'd want to llive for 100 years. I'm eager to get to Heaven. I've been studying near-death experiences, and we all go to Heaven, and dying is super pleasant. Sure beats this lung disease I'm living with. :)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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So Dot is a ghost. She and her son were BOTH killed? How tragic for Gunny! I guess next time you'll tell us how it happened. I don't think I'd want to llive for 100 years. I'm eager to get to Heaven. I've been studying near-death experiences, and we all go to Heaven, and dying is super pleasant. Sure beats this lung disease I'm living with. :)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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This story has a a few lanes to take and my funny side wants to claw it back from the maudlin. Many some happy MEDIUM.
Comment from judiverse
No wonder the young reporter is spooked, if there's this woman hanging around who's supposed to be dead. Twenty seems pretty young to die, but Gunny repeatedly says to him she'll always be 20. Apparently there was a son, too. I'm supposing the next part will explain about Theodore and why Dot says she let him down. Great work. judi
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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No wonder the young reporter is spooked, if there's this woman hanging around who's supposed to be dead. Twenty seems pretty young to die, but Gunny repeatedly says to him she'll always be 20. Apparently there was a son, too. I'm supposing the next part will explain about Theodore and why Dot says she let him down. Great work. judi
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Judi. There are two or three avenues of approach which come in maudlin or funny. I'll try to keep it light.
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You're welcome. If you can go with somewhat sentimental, it could be kept fairly light. judi
