Caterpillar sleeps
5-7-5 contest entry29 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
Clever comment on the need for patience and hard work to gain something worthwhile... and it fits the guidelines for this contest. Good luck in the contest. Great illustration...
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Clever comment on the need for patience and hard work to gain something worthwhile... and it fits the guidelines for this contest. Good luck in the contest. Great illustration...
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Thank you, this one was a few weeks ago. fun little piece.
God bless
Steve
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Caterpillar sleeps", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this a six, but unfortunately I'm never given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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"Caterpillar sleeps", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this a six, but unfortunately I'm never given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this most inspiring review, my friend. Sorry, it took so long to reply. Work!!!
God bless
Steve
Comment from Hitcher
Caterpillar sleeps and dreams of one day flying. When he wakes he is stunned to find he has wings : )) A very Nice, creative little 5-7-5 poem friend, good luck with it!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Caterpillar sleeps and dreams of one day flying. When he wakes he is stunned to find he has wings : )) A very Nice, creative little 5-7-5 poem friend, good luck with it!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you Hitcher for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Artasylum
You took all the glamour out of turning into being a butterfly Neonman (kidding.) Gook luck n your 5-7-5 writing promos entry... thanks and good luck...
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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You took all the glamour out of turning into being a butterfly Neonman (kidding.) Gook luck n your 5-7-5 writing promos entry... thanks and good luck...
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Lol, Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, creative and thought provoking.
The first two lines flow and connect well. The last line says it all.
The artwork is great and compliments this poem well.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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The author's words are descriptive, creative and thought provoking.
The first two lines flow and connect well. The last line says it all.
The artwork is great and compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Harmony.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
The form of your poem fits the formula and the picture is fascinating. The words speak for themselves but the graphic does add to the imagination as the words are read.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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The form of your poem fits the formula and the picture is fascinating. The words speak for themselves but the graphic does add to the imagination as the words are read.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Robert, I enjoy these little pieces.
God bless
Steve
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you're welcome
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed your 5-7-5 about metamorphosis.
Nice alliteration in line 2.
I really like the imagery of the caterpillar dreaming.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
I enjoyed your 5-7-5 about metamorphosis.
Nice alliteration in line 2.
I really like the imagery of the caterpillar dreaming.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Debra, I enjoy crafting these little guys.
God bless
Steve
Comment from fm wright
A truly well written 5-7-5 as line three really brings it altogether. The picture is a perfect match for it! I like this poem so much that I voted for it! Best of wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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A truly well written 5-7-5 as line three really brings it altogether. The picture is a perfect match for it! I like this poem so much that I voted for it! Best of wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Awe, Thank you, FM Wright, for the support.
God bless
Steve
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You are so welcome!
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Dean Kuch
I've always wondered about that, Anonymous Poet.
Do they, really, do ya think?
I mean, caterpillars...do think they really dream?
I kinda doubt it but you never know.
Your well presented, well crafted 5-7-5 poem for the contest is a good, solid entry.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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I've always wondered about that, Anonymous Poet.
Do they, really, do ya think?
I mean, caterpillars...do think they really dream?
I kinda doubt it but you never know.
Your well presented, well crafted 5-7-5 poem for the contest is a good, solid entry.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Dean. I would like to think they dream. Otherwise, well this would be a boring slumber lol.
God bless
Steve
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My pleasure, Steve.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Caterpillar Sleeps, has the right set up and allows that the stout worm has a easy time of it while the butterfly struggles to exist. Hey, then he can fly.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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This 5-7-5, Caterpillar Sleeps, has the right set up and allows that the stout worm has a easy time of it while the butterfly struggles to exist. Hey, then he can fly.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review Bill.
God bless
