Pix This 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Imaginings"art inspired poetry
10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you go girl!! :) ;) I wish I had a six, Debra-- this might be 'just a poem' but it says so damn much about so many relationships and the nuances that exist in the 'real world'! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing this unique piece.. great job!! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Oh, you go girl!! :) ;) I wish I had a six, Debra-- this might be 'just a poem' but it says so damn much about so many relationships and the nuances that exist in the 'real world'! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing this unique piece.. great job!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Hi Yvette :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate it. Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems to be a person mourning the loss of a lover and being jealous of the one who now has him. Good entry into the pix this challenge.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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This seems to be a person mourning the loss of a lover and being jealous of the one who now has him. Good entry into the pix this challenge.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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No problem, Debra
~Joan
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well imagine that Picasso and Warhol had duet! This is a short right that heats the reader up and then subtly chills them in the last lines. Does have a sombre but also an almost I no longer care attitude about it. Good and meaningful write and makes you think what some people get up too :)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Well imagine that Picasso and Warhol had duet! This is a short right that heats the reader up and then subtly chills them in the last lines. Does have a sombre but also an almost I no longer care attitude about it. Good and meaningful write and makes you think what some people get up too :)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Dale :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Heather Knight
Thanks goodness it's just a poem...
It's very different from everything else you write, but I like it as well.
It's perfect for the Pix This Challenge artwork.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks goodness it's just a poem...
It's very different from everything else you write, but I like it as well.
It's perfect for the Pix This Challenge artwork.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Maria :)
Sometimes, I like to try a different voice!
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Scaldingly well done, Miss Talent! Another facet of the beautiful diamond that is your poetic ability. Cool artwork to compliment it, too! It's, as the cliché goes these days, "the whole package." xo
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Scaldingly well done, Miss Talent! Another facet of the beautiful diamond that is your poetic ability. Cool artwork to compliment it, too! It's, as the cliché goes these days, "the whole package." xo
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, Rachelle :)
I always appreciate your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from moongirlwriter
For this being "just a poem" it truly says alot! Love, passion. . .when the words are on paper, they take on a life of their own. I would say this is the case of this poem. Well written, a little poignant and transparent. If you wrote this for a contest, best of luck. I also think you've selected artwork that goes nicely with the writing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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For this being "just a poem" it truly says alot! Love, passion. . .when the words are on paper, they take on a life of their own. I would say this is the case of this poem. Well written, a little poignant and transparent. If you wrote this for a contest, best of luck. I also think you've selected artwork that goes nicely with the writing.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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:)
Comment from Fred Fitzsimmons
So much said in so few words. A strong message of recognition, visceral imagery, emptiness, and longing for that which has been lost. Quite a combination in so few lines and supported nicely with a great piece of artwork. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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So much said in so few words. A strong message of recognition, visceral imagery, emptiness, and longing for that which has been lost. Quite a combination in so few lines and supported nicely with a great piece of artwork. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Hello, Fred :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate it together with your generous 6 star award :) Thanks again, Debra :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is despair in these words Debra as the sadness seeps through in the loss and grief as passion is a thing of the past, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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There is despair in these words Debra as the sadness seeps through in the loss and grief as passion is a thing of the past, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Dolly :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
No way out even in imagination, she basks in the heat of your passion, now she fails to in luxuriating; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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No way out even in imagination, she basks in the heat of your passion, now she fails to in luxuriating; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from royowen
I know this is not you Debra, you've probably got the perfect marriage on the go my friend. But this is still a too common occurrence on the marriage front my friend, This is beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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I know this is not you Debra, you've probably got the perfect marriage on the go my friend. But this is still a too common occurrence on the marriage front my friend, This is beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your nice feedback, Roy :) Best wishes, Debra
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Welcome Debra
