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Wilbur

So unfair...

24 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written story about the world of a child that is unbearable by the parents who are all but kind, and then when the little dragon friend visits the therapist, she was declared insane. LOL.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from tfawcus
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There are times in family life when children need to find an alternative reality. Having a dragon on your side might just be enough to save one's sanity. Finding someone else to believe in it would be a definite bonus.
Poor old Dr Walsh. Not only did she lose her sanity, but also her 'l'. All washed out, I presume.

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Thanks for reading, Tony.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Exceptional
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Ha, ha. This is a delightful flash fiction piece. There doesn't always need to be a culminating twist, as such, but there does need to be an effective sign off. You've achieved this here. I like it a lot :)

'Please, don't read the Saint George story,' he said. 'You know I find it very scary.' -- I like it :)

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Thanks for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from James W. Reynolds
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This is an entertaining and insightful story. It has a good pace and narrative and a satisfying ending. Simply as a suggestion, you may want to consider removing the story's last sentence. It does not seem necessary to me.

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Thanks for reading.