Wilbur
So unfair...24 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
LOL, well that will serve the therapist right. She should've known that dragons are real and a therapist must always believe their patient if they are to be trusted.
A fine story Maria and your imagination is so intriguing :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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LOL, well that will serve the therapist right. She should've known that dragons are real and a therapist must always believe their patient if they are to be trusted.
A fine story Maria and your imagination is so intriguing :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Gloria. xxx
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is a cute story, full of fun and magical whimsy. There was many a time when I would have love the opportunity to introduce my imaginary friend to someone who treated me dismissively. Good one!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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This is a cute story, full of fun and magical whimsy. There was many a time when I would have love the opportunity to introduce my imaginary friend to someone who treated me dismissively. Good one!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, Brenda.
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You're welcome, Maria. :)
Comment from Teri7
Wow! Maria, This is a very well written short story about the little girl and Wilbur the dragon. I love the way it ended and now everyone will understand what the child was saying about the dragon! Nicely done my friend. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Wow! Maria, This is a very well written short story about the little girl and Wilbur the dragon. I love the way it ended and now everyone will understand what the child was saying about the dragon! Nicely done my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from JudyE
Haha - serve the therapist right for not believing you. It would be nice sometimes to have a few of these fantasies come true. Imaginary friends can be very real to children.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Haha - serve the therapist right for not believing you. It would be nice sometimes to have a few of these fantasies come true. Imaginary friends can be very real to children.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your review, Judy. xx
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great finish Maria, you do the unexpected endings so well in your little stories. I could see this in a book and imagined reading it to a small child, I think they'd love it. Well done,
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Great finish Maria, you do the unexpected endings so well in your little stories. I could see this in a book and imagined reading it to a small child, I think they'd love it. Well done,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your kind review, Valda.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, how we all wished for our 'escape from reality' friends to actually be real!! ;) So loved this one, Lady Maria! :) Thank you so much for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Oh, how we all wished for our 'escape from reality' friends to actually be real!! ;) So loved this one, Lady Maria! :) Thank you so much for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for reading, Yvette.
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sweet revenge. I love it. It served the therapist just right. Yeah, Fantasy world, my word. A little girl to be quite frighten of, but who would know? I loved the story. Great imagination. All the best. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Oh, Sweet revenge. I love it. It served the therapist just right. Yeah, Fantasy world, my word. A little girl to be quite frighten of, but who would know? I loved the story. Great imagination. All the best. Ulla xx
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for reading, Ulla.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, it serves the little girl's therapist right if you ask me.
There are strange things and happenings that go on in our world that no one can explain away with mere logic.
They defy what most consider "The Norm" and baffle even the most intelligent individuals. Now not only has she sustained injuries from having seen a dragon she must also deal with the fact that she gave her patient the wrong information.
Great little story, Maria.
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Hey, it serves the little girl's therapist right if you ask me.
There are strange things and happenings that go on in our world that no one can explain away with mere logic.
They defy what most consider "The Norm" and baffle even the most intelligent individuals. Now not only has she sustained injuries from having seen a dragon she must also deal with the fact that she gave her patient the wrong information.
Great little story, Maria.
~Dean
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for reading, Dean. Take care.
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You're welcome, Maria.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from LisaMay
I wonder why the therapist did not just trot off to see another therapist and discuss the existence or not of dragons? Having a nervous breakdown over seeing a simple dragon! How very adult.
I love your story. Of course there are dragons, although some of them aren't as nice as Wilbur and they masquerade as parents, especially as shouting mothers and eye-rolling fathers.
(In the last line you have called the therapist Dr Wash, the other mention is Dr Walsh... consistency.)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I wonder why the therapist did not just trot off to see another therapist and discuss the existence or not of dragons? Having a nervous breakdown over seeing a simple dragon! How very adult.
I love your story. Of course there are dragons, although some of them aren't as nice as Wilbur and they masquerade as parents, especially as shouting mothers and eye-rolling fathers.
(In the last line you have called the therapist Dr Wash, the other mention is Dr Walsh... consistency.)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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You see? All stories are full of possibilities...
Thanks for reading.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, poor therapist! Couldn't Wilbur just appear to the parents and then the whole idea about sending her to the therapist wouldn't be a problem. Or maybe all three could go see one together. Lol. Fun story.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Oh, poor therapist! Couldn't Wilbur just appear to the parents and then the whole idea about sending her to the therapist wouldn't be a problem. Or maybe all three could go see one together. Lol. Fun story.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for reading, Helen.
