Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Love the picture Maria, and you did well ironing out your little poem into an amusing story about not having anything to write about. The music and pictures, I do that too, I find the music usually works.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Thanks so much for reading, Valda.

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

One the best promises ever, to give someone you love the security and assurance you will be there for them. It is a wonderful feeling and this short piece shouts of that comfort that we, as human beings crave. Great job with this and Good Luck! (I love the photograph. It reminds me of myself looking for my favorite sports bra!) Good choice.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Thanks for your kind review,Wendy.

Comment from Darlene BoClair

Excellent

I was so curious for each line you have written. I wanted to know what you loss. I had my imagination go in many directions for your loss. Your loss amazed me with the beautiful words found on the parchment. Parchment reminds me of baked cookies, cookies that will delight the spirit at any given time. A loss so honored by a new amazing found. I love that you shared with this community.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019

Thanks so much for your review. Have a lovely day.

Comment from LG Wolfe

Exceptional

This is the most original story I've read in a long time. Your 'story for the day' - the story in the story - WAS, in fact, made one of your best by its placement. Such clever irony.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019

Thanks so much for reading and for the extra star.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is just so clever, Maria. And the poem is just right up my alley, as I love the phonetics of it.

Hopefully your find your inspiration, but my guess is it didn't get off too far.

Loved this. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019

Thanks so much, Gloria.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match you captured my attention from the first line to the last, it is happen in 2019 I got my paper mixed up as I began to write the poem for a contest.
I realize it's the wrong poem, now I have lost the poem, entering fee,
Oh what a mess
Cookie

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019

Thanks, Cookie.

reply by misscookie on 21-Jun-2019

Your very welcome, have a nice week end
Cookie

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

MJ,

hahahahahahahahaha This is a cute one, friend. I like what the pressing was able to do. Wonder if that would help in some of these situations where we need just a few more syllables and such... hmmm...

Thanks!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019

Thanks for reading, Robyn.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Love it -- of course, I never really thought to iron/stretch out a poem and make it work (LOL!), but I definitely ran into the 'poof!' of the muse this past weekend! ;) ;) A wonderful little composition here, Lady Maria.... Oh, and a hint: stand very quietly by the tele and threaten to sit on the couch and turn it on....it usually brings at least one of my muses out for a bit --- they HATE the tele! ;) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Maria, as of lately my muse spends a lot of time on vacation...LOL...but once in awhile does drop back in...I love your story told my sweet friend...and your picture says it all...very well written...love you sweet girl...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019

Thanks for your kind review, Linda. Hope your Muse comes back from her holiday soon.

reply by l.raven on 19-Jun-2019

I hope my muse comes back soon as well...always welcome you...xxoo

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Very amusing, Maria, and I love the image of the girl search. Clever and completely unique. Enjoyable. You have plenty of inspiration, that is a fact. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019

Thanks for being so kind. xxx