Standing in line for a Passing.
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Comment from Patty Palmer
Now that was really cute! I especially liked the part about them only going to inherit are his false teeth. I guess it would let them know what they thought of them
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Now that was really cute! I especially liked the part about them only going to inherit are his false teeth. I guess it would let them know what they thought of them
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from Patty Palmer
Now that was really cute! I especially liked the part about them only going to inherit are his false teeth. I guess it would let them know what they thought of them
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Now that was really cute! I especially liked the part about them only going to inherit are his false teeth. I guess it would let them know what they thought of them
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from Patty Palmer
Now that was really cute! I especially liked the part about them only going to inherit are his false teeth. I guess it would let them know what they thought of them
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Now that was really cute! I especially liked the part about them only going to inherit are his false teeth. I guess it would let them know what they thought of them
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
