Feel the Passion
A Trinet Entry16 total reviews
Comment from --Turtle.
Nice job with this entry.
I enjoyed the theme of the poem, and the anticipation that came with the enjambment of each line leaving a trail of curiosity to the end. Ends with a sense of satisfaction at passion giving a person done prep and flare when indulged.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Nice job with this entry.
I enjoyed the theme of the poem, and the anticipation that came with the enjambment of each line leaving a trail of curiosity to the end. Ends with a sense of satisfaction at passion giving a person done prep and flare when indulged.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
A perfect choice of artwork and color scheme to accompany your Trinet.
I love how you expressed living one's passion for life, letting it surface with flare.
An excellent contest entry!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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A perfect choice of artwork and color scheme to accompany your Trinet.
I love how you expressed living one's passion for life, letting it surface with flare.
An excellent contest entry!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from juliaSjames
Wise advice. Brings to mind a song from the fifties or sixties, Fire down below!
I like the pun in "live life with flare". Very cool (sic).
I've never tried a trinet poem. You made it look easy which showcases your expertise.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Wise advice. Brings to mind a song from the fifties or sixties, Fire down below!
I like the pun in "live life with flare". Very cool (sic).
I've never tried a trinet poem. You made it look easy which showcases your expertise.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This trinet, Feel the Passion, has the proper formatting and leaves the reader with advice to allow passions to come forth and sear the surroundings.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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This trinet, Feel the Passion, has the proper formatting and leaves the reader with advice to allow passions to come forth and sear the surroundings.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh now we are TALKIN', Mystery Poet!! This is my mantra of life, so, of course, I love this Trinet of yours!! And red is my favorite color, so even the ARTWORK I find fabulous! Exceptional job, and I hope it garners you first prize! xo
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Oh now we are TALKIN', Mystery Poet!! This is my mantra of life, so, of course, I love this Trinet of yours!! And red is my favorite color, so even the ARTWORK I find fabulous! Exceptional job, and I hope it garners you first prize! xo
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your passionate and enthusiastic review!
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Hahaha - I see what you did there, Mystery Poet: "Feel the Passion/passionate review"... Very cute! xo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and word count throughout. You even gave us a touch of rhyme to savor as well. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and word count throughout. You even gave us a touch of rhyme to savor as well. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thanks for dropping in to share your insights on this piece!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Passion can come in many forms, Anonymous Poet.
One can have passion for their profession, their writing, a lover, or all of the above.
In any event, it's much better to be passionate about something...anything...that adds meaning to your life than to be listless and ho-hum about life.
Good luck to you in the Trinet Contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Passion can come in many forms, Anonymous Poet.
One can have passion for their profession, their writing, a lover, or all of the above.
In any event, it's much better to be passionate about something...anything...that adds meaning to your life than to be listless and ho-hum about life.
Good luck to you in the Trinet Contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thanks for dropping in to share your insights on this piece!
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Sure, anytime.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer: As I read the work the message seems pretty clear to me. When you make your decisions in life and you base your daily living on those decisions, don't look back. Live up to your commitments and do it like you mean it. Nice work . -Robert-
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Hello mystery writer: As I read the work the message seems pretty clear to me. When you make your decisions in life and you base your daily living on those decisions, don't look back. Live up to your commitments and do it like you mean it. Nice work . -Robert-
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Terrific phrasing throughout your Trinet writing entry.
Lots of words provide me great imagery: passion, heart, and flare... 'live life' is also a nice alliteration.
Your selected illustration is eye catching. I too try to use FanArt to complement all my posts.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Terrific phrasing throughout your Trinet writing entry.
Lots of words provide me great imagery: passion, heart, and flare... 'live life' is also a nice alliteration.
Your selected illustration is eye catching. I too try to use FanArt to complement all my posts.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for the positive feedback!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An interesting piece of art,
and nice presentation.
-You have a good poem
with good form, and have
effectively used one
continuous thought.
-I like how you describe
passion entering your soul,
and conclude with
"just live life with flare."
-A good entry, good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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-An interesting piece of art,
and nice presentation.
-You have a good poem
with good form, and have
effectively used one
continuous thought.
-I like how you describe
passion entering your soul,
and conclude with
"just live life with flare."
-A good entry, good luck.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Appreciare your dropping by to read and share your insights.
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You are quite welcome.
