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Heavenly Grace

Spires reach to the heavens

7 total reviews 
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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A perfect Trinet.
I loved how you used a spiritual theme since the Trinet appears to be in the shape of a cross.
Your words, 'to siphon God's holy grace from the celestial water color evening sky' painted a beautiful picture by itself, but accompanied by this beautiful photograph, they really stood out.
Excellent choice of background color; very eye-appealing presentation.
An wonderful contest entry :)

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Nice thought about a Trinet in the shape of a cross; I will remember that. Thanks for your read and review.
reply by C. Gale Burnett on 19-Jun-2019
    My pleasure :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This trinket, Heavenly Grace, has the proper formatting and finds the iconic church building creating images of God's Grace flowing down to the waiting followers. Nice.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
    Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A beautiful church reminding me of my cathedral in Lichfield that has three spires and much older than your lovely church, you win my vote here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
    Thanks for your review and your encouraging words.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Wow!! This is REALLY good!! I love the phrases "to siphon Go-d's holy grace" and "water color evening sky." So beautifully, imaginatively descriptive!! And gorgeous artwork, too! Really well-done entry. Good luck in the contest, Mystery poet!! xo

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
    Thank you so much for your review and encouraging words.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 18-Jun-2019
    You're very welcome! xo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with correct line and word count throughout. If this is the Saint Stan in Chicago then WOW as I went to school there K through 2 and was also baptized and made my First Communion there. We went to the Polish mass on Christmas Eve for years even after we had moved to the suburbs. Well done and all the best in the voting.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
    Dear Mystic Angel, I am aware of St. Stan's in Chicago, pass it every time I'm headed downtown on the expressway. The one pictured is in Bay City, Michigan. My mother had almost the identical experience except at St. John of God parish on the south side of Chicago. Thanks for sharing part of your childhood and for your review, and good wishes.
Comment from JLR
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Very fun, easy to reach the eye of the reader with a visual sense of all the natural essence one sees beyond the outer aspect of the human eye into the depth of the Holy I. Thanks and great success on the voting

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
    Thanks so much for the honor of a six star rating. Your comments and encouragement are much appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- now that is quite an awesome vision for the spires to siphon.... truly gives power and reason to the architectural design ... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
    Thanks so much for your comments and your rating.