Inspire
Nature as a source.20 total reviews
Comment from mvbrooks
I liked the image with its simple drawing and light colors. It seems a good pairing for the story of short sentences often containing big words. I could envision this as a bed time story inspiring creative dreams
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I liked the image with its simple drawing and light colors. It seems a good pairing for the story of short sentences often containing big words. I could envision this as a bed time story inspiring creative dreams
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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So you noticed the big words? :) I chose them all on purpose...
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Maria Jose, that is just so lovely. You managed to put tears in my eyes. Your story is so gentle and so positive at the same time. I loved the picture you painted with your words. One of your best writes. A hug. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Awe, Maria Jose, that is just so lovely. You managed to put tears in my eyes. Your story is so gentle and so positive at the same time. I loved the picture you painted with your words. One of your best writes. A hug. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I'm glad you liked it, Ulla. Thanks for reading and for the extra star.
Comment from Gail Denham
A nice short story - I guess we'd all like to inspire - help someone get the message that they could try - that there is hope. I have led poetry workshops and it's so cool when the light goes on in someone's head that they could express themselves.
good job.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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A nice short story - I guess we'd all like to inspire - help someone get the message that they could try - that there is hope. I have led poetry workshops and it's so cool when the light goes on in someone's head that they could express themselves.
good job.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Poetry workshops! How fascinating! Thanks for reading.
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful answer,that's exactly why we write, or should be be, artists and sculptors dealing with actual imagery and perhaps something beyond, writers deals with the inner eye. Well done, great post,Maria, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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What a wonderful answer,that's exactly why we write, or should be be, artists and sculptors dealing with actual imagery and perhaps something beyond, writers deals with the inner eye. Well done, great post,Maria, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your review, Roy.
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Welcome
Comment from Rikki66
The rain, the puddles, the little bird were all muses for your endeavors. Inspiration comes from all directions. It is not just your words it is the painting that inspires my review.
Rikki
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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The rain, the puddles, the little bird were all muses for your endeavors. Inspiration comes from all directions. It is not just your words it is the painting that inspires my review.
Rikki
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Rikki.
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welcome.
Rikki
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Anyone who used words for expression can find true writing in anything they see. You are one of those. I love your short stories as they inspire me to enjoy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Anyone who used words for expression can find true writing in anything they see. You are one of those. I love your short stories as they inspire me to enjoy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your kind words, Barb.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This story flashes a message but all in imaginary world of action and interaction, answer in hallucination like, so surprising, as the answer was strange; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This story flashes a message but all in imaginary world of action and interaction, answer in hallucination like, so surprising, as the answer was strange; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
I had to smile for your words are so true just look around abnd you will see something to paint write a poem or son about
Thank you for sharing
cookie
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
I had to smile for your words are so true just look around abnd you will see something to paint write a poem or son about
Thank you for sharing
cookie
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Cookie. xxx
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Your very welcome
Have a blessed day
cookie
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Peace God be with you
cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, I'm so glad this little sparrow spoke to you Maria and I fed the pigeons today with my granddaughter and she so enjoyed it. Your words are enchanting and magical, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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He he he, I'm so glad this little sparrow spoke to you Maria and I fed the pigeons today with my granddaughter and she so enjoyed it. Your words are enchanting and magical, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks for reading, Dolly. xxx
Comment from lyenochka
Sigh! I love your poetic prose. It's sometimes just a very common and simple part of life that can be our writing muse. This would have been great for a contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Sigh! I love your poetic prose. It's sometimes just a very common and simple part of life that can be our writing muse. This would have been great for a contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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It seems I succeeded as I was aiming at poetic prose. Thanks for reading and for the extra star.
