Life Has Blessed Me
Brief, but true49 total reviews
Comment from MsPetra
For the last line I would put "Life has certainly blessed me"
Other than that I thought your poem was fantastic. You said a lot here with your words. I see the wisdom that time has brought you.
Other than adding that one word I wouldn't change a thing. Please keep writing Sir, I am looking forward to your next offering.
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For the last line I would put "Life has certainly blessed me"
Other than that I thought your poem was fantastic. You said a lot here with your words. I see the wisdom that time has brought you.
Other than adding that one word I wouldn't change a thing. Please keep writing Sir, I am looking forward to your next offering.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A life filled with ups and downs is still a life worth living. An enjoyable poem to read and a clear message. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
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A life filled with ups and downs is still a life worth living. An enjoyable poem to read and a clear message. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good legacy to leave, my friend and you are right, many people are blessed with a no regret life. The poem was sweet and well versed. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a good legacy to leave, my friend and you are right, many people are blessed with a no regret life. The poem was sweet and well versed. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
Comment from Ogden
Yes, Fate calls the shots. You clearly have paid your dues, the price for surviving so many years.
Keep on doing whatever it is that has kept you going so well, Jay.
Best wishes,
Don
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Yes, Fate calls the shots. You clearly have paid your dues, the price for surviving so many years.
Keep on doing whatever it is that has kept you going so well, Jay.
Best wishes,
Don
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Even with many struggles, it is wonderful that you can look back and see the blessing out weigh the hard times. Most of us do not enjoy much fame or fortune, but we all enjoy blessing. Well done, sir. Rox
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Even with many struggles, it is wonderful that you can look back and see the blessing out weigh the hard times. Most of us do not enjoy much fame or fortune, but we all enjoy blessing. Well done, sir. Rox
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
Comment from susand3022
Hi Jaybird, I'm glad to hear that life has blessed you along the way. It's hard to have to live without someone you will miss as you have to go on without them. Hopefully, other experiences along the way have made your life sweet :)
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Hi Jaybird, I'm glad to hear that life has blessed you along the way. It's hard to have to live without someone you will miss as you have to go on without them. Hopefully, other experiences along the way have made your life sweet :)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Jaybird: great truth about your life and so many.
We keep going, one step at a time. I know we
are blessed. We can bless others by helping them.
I'm glad you are on this site. flylikeaneagle
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Jaybird: great truth about your life and so many.
We keep going, one step at a time. I know we
are blessed. We can bless others by helping them.
I'm glad you are on this site. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
Comment from victor 66
Yes, jaybird... it is fitting, I suspect for many others. It certainly is for me.
Long ago when I was nineteen, I thought I'd never live to see the age of twenty. Now, here I am at seventy-two wondering where the time went. I am most fortunate to be able to wonder. I hope I can feel the way you do, if I live long enough. I wish you well.
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Yes, jaybird... it is fitting, I suspect for many others. It certainly is for me.
Long ago when I was nineteen, I thought I'd never live to see the age of twenty. Now, here I am at seventy-two wondering where the time went. I am most fortunate to be able to wonder. I hope I can feel the way you do, if I live long enough. I wish you well.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi Sir this six star is for the strength, the love and determination that inspired your your life. He lies if he says that he has not suffered in this life, which is like a spider's web and we are the fated flies. Struggle if you can and free yourself. If you can then you have conquered life.....and you have, brave man?
Benny
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Hi Sir this six star is for the strength, the love and determination that inspired your your life. He lies if he says that he has not suffered in this life, which is like a spider's web and we are the fated flies. Struggle if you can and free yourself. If you can then you have conquered life.....and you have, brave man?
Benny
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
Comment from June Sargent
Through it all, it is so inspiring to see that you have chosen to look on the brighter side of your life. Your experiences, both the happy and the sad, have obviously filled you with an inner joy that won't allow you to become embittered. Thank you for sharing your wonderful attitude.
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Through it all, it is so inspiring to see that you have chosen to look on the brighter side of your life. Your experiences, both the happy and the sad, have obviously filled you with an inner joy that won't allow you to become embittered. Thank you for sharing your wonderful attitude.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
