The Legacy of a June Wedding
So much a part of the world, so much a legacy of life...9 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I appreciate this wedded bliss and wedding set admits June's green splendor. I however, married in the winter just before Christmas. It was that or wait even longer. Jackson was still in school so he had a two week break and we married. I think anytime is lovely as long as there is love. I imported the greenery and flowers though.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I appreciate this wedded bliss and wedding set admits June's green splendor. I however, married in the winter just before Christmas. It was that or wait even longer. Jackson was still in school so he had a two week break and we married. I think anytime is lovely as long as there is love. I imported the greenery and flowers though.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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We married in August...the hottest month of the year (according to my husband who hails from Michigan!!). ;) Thanx for the review on this one, Lady Sal -- Oh, and I am diggin your new pic of you and the hubby!! ;) ;) Take care! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from ShyWri
This tribute to marriage could be inscribed on the bulletin for a wedding ceremony, or even read aloud as part of the ritual. It aptly illustrates the artwork you have chosen, as well.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This tribute to marriage could be inscribed on the bulletin for a wedding ceremony, or even read aloud as part of the ritual. It aptly illustrates the artwork you have chosen, as well.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review!
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a lovely, lovely poem. Surely you have a winner here. Your topic is perfect. When I think of June, weddings come to mind even though all of my kids have gotten married in July. And your depiction of winter's promise is simply poetic.
You are an exquisite writer.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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What a lovely, lovely poem. Surely you have a winner here. Your topic is perfect. When I think of June, weddings come to mind even though all of my kids have gotten married in July. And your depiction of winter's promise is simply poetic.
You are an exquisite writer.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Glad you liked it ..... since it was your situation that spoke to my muse to focus on marriage rather than "summer for teachers"!! Yeah, I know that you told me his wedding isn't til July, but you put 'wedding' on the brain with that email and here you are! :) ;) Thanx for the review, MQ -- Blessings! :) :)
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Thank you for keeping our wedding in your thoughts. I'm glad it's not June though.
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I knew it was you.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
June is the promise of so much and it has got to be the busiest month for weddings. One of my sons has an anniversary in June.
Aside from the happenings the weather is fantastic where I live and almost an insurance of a good day. A lovely poem depicting the promise of so much.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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June is the promise of so much and it has got to be the busiest month for weddings. One of my sons has an anniversary in June.
Aside from the happenings the weather is fantastic where I live and almost an insurance of a good day. A lovely poem depicting the promise of so much.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for this fantastic review! 8-)
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Really well done on this poem that celebrate springs renewal into the traditional June summer weddings. It is a popular month. I saw no errors and hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Really well done on this poem that celebrate springs renewal into the traditional June summer weddings. It is a popular month. I saw no errors and hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review - much appreciated!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
That there is a natural harmony, melody and concordance for wedding in June manifests the fulfillment of Spring's rebirth and realization of winter's promise and that two hearts will persist; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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That there is a natural harmony, melody and concordance for wedding in June manifests the fulfillment of Spring's rebirth and realization of winter's promise and that two hearts will persist; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review!! 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written even the odds poem about the legacy of a June wedding that is the time for renewal and start of Spring where everything around is green and flowers bloom.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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A very well-written even the odds poem about the legacy of a June wedding that is the time for renewal and start of Spring where everything around is green and flowers bloom.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from tfawcus
Perfect in form. I had to check how many syllables in realization! You were dead right, of course! LOL
I liked the way you added the feature of using the last line of one line as the first word of the next. However, I can't remember the name of that kind of poem. Even though you don't use it all the way through your poem, it does add an element of added interest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Perfect in form. I had to check how many syllables in realization! You were dead right, of course! LOL
I liked the way you added the feature of using the last line of one line as the first word of the next. However, I can't remember the name of that kind of poem. Even though you don't use it all the way through your poem, it does add an element of added interest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Wow! Thank you so very much for your wonderful review and encouraging comments -- so glad you enjoyed!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a refreshing and uplifting write about two lovers making that bond and I adore June weddings. I have not seen many take place recently because of the rain which has kept me indoors. I enjoyed your unique, warm and loving presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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This is a refreshing and uplifting write about two lovers making that bond and I adore June weddings. I have not seen many take place recently because of the rain which has kept me indoors. I enjoyed your unique, warm and loving presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review!
