Forty Years With Full Hearts
June 30, 197928 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congrats on first place, Beautiful Lady Diane!! ;) ;) What a wonderful and love-filled write that brings visions of the times each of us has spent with our special person! ;) ;) I do hope you print this out for him and laminate it -- such a loving testimony to Y'ALL! :) ;) Thanx for Even joining all of us in the Odd fun -- LOL! :) ;) Take good care of you this week! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Congrats on first place, Beautiful Lady Diane!! ;) ;) What a wonderful and love-filled write that brings visions of the times each of us has spent with our special person! ;) ;) I do hope you print this out for him and laminate it -- such a loving testimony to Y'ALL! :) ;) Thanx for Even joining all of us in the Odd fun -- LOL! :) ;) Take good care of you this week! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Aw, Yvette!
Thank you ever so much for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
It is just a humble offering, but June 30th is "our day." And with our last name of "Truelove," well, I just had to write to celebrate the fact that true love can exist!
Thank you again! I so enjoy penning your creation of "Even to Odd" poetry! Such a challenging but rewarding format!
Take Care!
diane
Comment from Steve Harsin
Nice, and well done. If I was your sweetie, I'd feel very honored by this. What a wonderful 40th anniversary gift. That photo silhouette is the perfect image to accompany the poem, too.
Thank you for sharing it!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Nice, and well done. If I was your sweetie, I'd feel very honored by this. What a wonderful 40th anniversary gift. That photo silhouette is the perfect image to accompany the poem, too.
Thank you for sharing it!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hello Steve!
Many thanks for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
I have yet to share this poem with my husband, but I will!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Time flies, specially when love is true . I hate to count a happy married life by the number of years we are together. The yardsticks are happiness and sincerity true to each other. Let the years go by, but let happiness last.
Benny
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Time flies, specially when love is true . I hate to count a happy married life by the number of years we are together. The yardsticks are happiness and sincerity true to each other. Let the years go by, but let happiness last.
Benny
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hello Benny!
I love your "yardsticks!" And I agree; however, the contest prompt called for a date in June that means something special = June 30, 1979 = 40 years this year. Here's to lasting happiness regardless of the year stamped! :)
Thank you!
Comment from Boogienights
This poem resonated with me because my husband and i will be married 40 years in October. Time flys, but we still feel as you and your spouse feels ... no regrets. A wonderful contest entry, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This poem resonated with me because my husband and i will be married 40 years in October. Time flys, but we still feel as you and your spouse feels ... no regrets. A wonderful contest entry, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Wonderful!
Happy 40th Anniversary to you and your husband as well!
So grateful for all these years and memories!
So pleased my humble offering resonated with you!
Thank you!
Comment from TPAC
Always pleased to hear someone joy in the land of projected chaos living through their comforts points I never achieved finding through their statement new life. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Always pleased to hear someone joy in the land of projected chaos living through their comforts points I never achieved finding through their statement new life. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Good Morning, TPAC!
So pleased you enjoyed.
We've been blessed these past 40 years...with a little bit of luck thrown in for good measure.
Thank you!
Enjoy your week!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully. The rhyme and meter are solid allowing the read to be fluid ad serene. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully. The rhyme and meter are solid allowing the read to be fluid ad serene. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hello Mystic Angel!
We surely have been blessed - in so many ways - these past 40 years!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Comment from Heather Knight
Wow! Forty years. Not many people can say the same nowadays. Congratulations.
Thanks so much for sharing your lovely poem and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Wow! Forty years. Not many people can say the same nowadays. Congratulations.
Thanks so much for sharing your lovely poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hello Maria!
Those 40 years have truly passed far too quickly.
Thank you for your excellent rating and kind wishes!
Ever grateful.
Comment from Hitcher
No regrets. No looking back.
Hearts still full, feeling
completely
loved...
What can I say friend... I know exactly how you feel, but our(my wife and I) journey has still along way to go hopefully. We are only 26 years together, but still madly and deeply in love with one another : )
Excellent poem!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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No regrets. No looking back.
Hearts still full, feeling
completely
loved...
What can I say friend... I know exactly how you feel, but our(my wife and I) journey has still along way to go hopefully. We are only 26 years together, but still madly and deeply in love with one another : )
Excellent poem!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hello Hitcher!
Twenty-six years? Congratulations! But I promise you, the next fourteen will flash by before you know it! Enjoy every moment!
Thank you for your excellent rating and heartfelt review!
Comment from ShyWri
I was not familiar with this form of verse; is it a FanStory creation? Yours is a wonderful tribute to love and to your spouse and to the forty years you will have shared together at the end of this month. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I was not familiar with this form of verse; is it a FanStory creation? Yours is a wonderful tribute to love and to your spouse and to the forty years you will have shared together at the end of this month. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hello ShyWri!
Yes! This poetic form is new - created by fellow FanStorian, Y.M.Roger = an incredibly talented writer!
So pleased you enjoyed my offering! Thank you!
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Thank you for letting me know!
Comment from Beri Bee
This poem is very well done. I like best how each line is complete, and how your first and last words are synonymous. The narrator has had a lot of those last days in June and still finds them significant remembrance days so that is the fascinating focus here. I think that "arrives with soft flourish" is the phrase most beautiful here.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This poem is very well done. I like best how each line is complete, and how your first and last words are synonymous. The narrator has had a lot of those last days in June and still finds them significant remembrance days so that is the fascinating focus here. I think that "arrives with soft flourish" is the phrase most beautiful here.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hello Beri!
Last day of June is approaching fast!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Much appreciated!
