Cashless and desperate
A 1-5-5-9 syllable: Four line poem18 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Chris,
I have to think there will be many readers nodding their heads and going, 'uh huh, uh huh...' They'll get this one, for sure! *smile* Thanks for the grin! Good luck!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Chris,
I have to think there will be many readers nodding their heads and going, 'uh huh, uh huh...' They'll get this one, for sure! *smile* Thanks for the grin! Good luck!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Hi Robyn, Thanks and yes I an sure there are. One of the reasons I am not here all the time is the cost to do so I dont have the time to review just to make enough money to promote my work therefore I spend my hard earned money on self promotion. I would jate to add up the amount spent over the last 4 years Last year alone the April daily challenge was over $900.00. Aussie Dollars .It is a shame that we need to spend money just to get recognisedand the organisers must be worth a fortune LOL. This is a very clever site in the way it is set up bit very costly Hmmm. The up side is the great friends made and that keeps me here so on that note I will say by friend and keep my fingers crossed Ha Ha . This was written with tongue in cheek anyway I never win any committee contests and this is not deep and meaninful enough to go close LOL Cheers Chris
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Oh, wow! That's crazy. Hope to see more of you when you can -- hugs
Comment from misscookie
Oh my goodness I can't believe your writing about this.
Because I just told my friend, F/s is driving me insane
If I take time to reviews messages, I cant' get to replies,If I take time to read from the poems list ,and that only way to made money
then I lost out on poems the members write because they keep coming in
Thank you for sharing
cookie
A 1-5-5-9 syllable: Four line poem
Cashless and desperate
by Chrissy710
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Oh my goodness I can't believe your writing about this.
Because I just told my friend, F/s is driving me insane
If I take time to reviews messages, I cant' get to replies,If I take time to read from the poems list ,and that only way to made money
then I lost out on poems the members write because they keep coming in
Thank you for sharing
cookie
A 1-5-5-9 syllable: Four line poem
Cashless and desperate
by Chrissy710
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Hi Cookie Oh yes I am hearing you same problem for me. Sometimes I think the organisers or Tom must be millionaires from all the momey people spend on this site. It cost me a small fortune to be here as I cant review quick enough to make any 'money' to use to promote my work. So the only way is to use my real money at least $36 Aussie dollars per poem and that adds up for example last year I entered the April a poem a day and it cost me over $900.00 for the month. so never again. That is why I am not here all the time I cant afford it and it seems a shame to have to spend money to get recognised anyway. This site is great in many ways mainly the lovely friends and fun being here but the dwon side is the cost.
Anyway Cookie I think we have a similar outlook and I enjoy our correspondence you always give me great support and that makes me happy. Have a great day Cheers Christine xxx
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Years ago it was not like this anyhoo
I write for enjoyment and the few friends and member that reply and give me a rating I'm happy to have them.
the only things there are many times I miss their work which sadden me
Cookie
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Hi Cookie Yes I know it is hard to keep up with everyone and I love to hear from you I value your reviews and always smile when I see your name Cheers Dear Cookie Christine xx
Comment from Gail Denham
You got that right. And I have other deadlines also. Just picked up on one from one of the state poetry associations - I have the poem written - just not completely polished - and the deadline is tomorrow night at midnight - wow - so dinner had to wait. We sure to have to move fast on this fanstory stuff.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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You got that right. And I have other deadlines also. Just picked up on one from one of the state poetry associations - I have the poem written - just not completely polished - and the deadline is tomorrow night at midnight - wow - so dinner had to wait. We sure to have to move fast on this fanstory stuff.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Gail, Thanks so much and I do hope you do not starve getting everything done LOL .Thanks for taking time to review my poem and good luck in your poetry competition I hope we can read it also here on FS Cheers Christine
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Dinner was in the oven - veggies waiting to be chopped - but I made it - and it was good - plus the poem left my computer. Thanks.
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Comment from Patty Palmer
Hey! That's what I'm talkin' about!! The cash! It's all about the cash!!! LoL Pretty cute poem and the turtle with his bag thrown over his back is a real hoot! Love the poem!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hey! That's what I'm talkin' about!! The cash! It's all about the cash!!! LoL Pretty cute poem and the turtle with his bag thrown over his back is a real hoot! Love the poem!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Patricia, Thanks for reading my poem amd yes a bit more cash is needed a d any contrubutions to my coffer is always welcome A bit of fun with the requirements LOL Cheers Christine
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You're very welcome! I just joined like three weeks ago and I've entered some contests and I'm keeping myself crazy reviewing enough to earn enough to promote them.
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Hi Patricia, Welcome to FS It is quite addictive but can be expensive and it takes many reviews to try to make enough 'funny money' to promote ones own poems or stories. I live in Australia and It cost me $36 real dollars everytime I want to promote my work so it can add up quickly And I dont have the time to spend here to review all day just to try to build up the coffers as each promote costs 2.95 real dollars a pump so one can go through heaps of money just to get onto page one, which then brings more reviewers most times. The catch is that if you cant promote yoir work stays on back pages and people are feluctsnt to read or review ad they dont get paid much to do so. It is a catch 22 spend to get recognised or stay in the back blocks. I realised quickly that this is a money making site for the orgainser but the up side is the great friendships and fun one has putting the work on. You will build up a fan base also which is nice to people from all around the world reading and reviewing your work.
Also you will learn heaps about poetry styles and writing as many reviewers are very helpful and will give you tips and helps when needed.
I have fun entering the contest ( when I get the time) bit usually cost at least 5 membe dollars to enter those one are voted by the members and I have managed to win or place in many of those over my past 4 years so it is alwaus noce to be judged by your peers.
The free contests or ones carrying a cash prize is judged by the FS commitee ( who ever they are and are difficult to win I have managed a 2nd place in one)
So there are some ups and some downs being here bit I love it and despite the expense it keeps me here
So once again welcome and all the best in the future here At FS
Cheers Christine
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Christine, Glad to meet you! I too am already in love with this site! However, I refuse to spend any real money!! I have the time to put into reviewing since I'm a retired nurse. but I do love this place. And I am making friends and learning as well
XXX Patty
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Hi Patty I am a nurse too still working but as a nurse educator however on leave until Sept this year Long service leave . I will clock up 50 years nursing in Jan 2020 so not long to go and will wind back soon. My clinical nirsing was in the Emergency Dept bit have been a nirse educator for 26 years in various roles so I still have patient contact with students as their clinical teacher.. Have just read your post on things that annoy you comp and loved it so will keep in touch Cheers Christinexx
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Hi Patty I am a nurse too still working but as a nurse educator however on leave until Sept this year Long service leave . I will clock up 50 years nursing in Jan 2020 so not long to go and will wind back soon. My clinical nirsing was in the Emergency Dept bit have been a nirse educator for 26 years in various roles so I still have patient contact with students as their clinical teacher.. Have just read your post on things that annoy you comp and loved it so will keep in touch Cheers Christinexx
Comment from Joy Graham
You shameless hussy! Why didn't I think of this kind of poetic entry. Hey, it has worked before. This would make a great contest of it's own where all entrants must beg and plead to win the contest. Tell us your sob story of why you need to win more than the rest.
Well, I love it! If I were in charge you'd be a top contender. That picture of the turtle looking sad and desperate seals the deal for me.
All in good fun :)
Joy xx
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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You shameless hussy! Why didn't I think of this kind of poetic entry. Hey, it has worked before. This would make a great contest of it's own where all entrants must beg and plead to win the contest. Tell us your sob story of why you need to win more than the rest.
Well, I love it! If I were in charge you'd be a top contender. That picture of the turtle looking sad and desperate seals the deal for me.
All in good fun :)
Joy xx
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hussy I am LOL a d a little bit cynical at times but this was too much fun to resist AND the cash will be great when it wins Ha Ha ( Probably not though 😢 It is not deep amd meaningful Ha Ha. still wait and see thanks for your vote of confidence Turtle is cute Cheers Christine
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes Chrstine, you have identified our problem. One needs to review frequently to earn those funny FS moneys (or just win the no-fee contests!) Of course, getting a six is a great pat on the back.
If you are not in the game (and pay your dollar or two), you can't win the lottery (-;
Your selected illustration is amusing and ably complements your verse: the vagabond turtle!
My alternative punctuation to your verse is:
Yes,
another contest!
I need the money!
My subject is about the 'Cash Prize.'
As the poet, you control the post AND punctuation. LOL
Mark
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Yes Chrstine, you have identified our problem. One needs to review frequently to earn those funny FS moneys (or just win the no-fee contests!) Of course, getting a six is a great pat on the back.
If you are not in the game (and pay your dollar or two), you can't win the lottery (-;
Your selected illustration is amusing and ably complements your verse: the vagabond turtle!
My alternative punctuation to your verse is:
Yes,
another contest!
I need the money!
My subject is about the 'Cash Prize.'
As the poet, you control the post AND punctuation. LOL
Mark
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Mark, Thanls for yoir review and suggestions for punctuation I have taken them up so appreciate your advice I want to make it as impressive as I can LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Heather Knight
This is very funny, Christine. And I can relate. Those elusive member dollars! They are tough to earn, aren't they?
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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This is very funny, Christine. And I can relate. Those elusive member dollars! They are tough to earn, aren't they?
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Maria, Thanks and I think a few can relate and yes Very tough to earn still a bit of fun costs nothing Cheers Christine
Comment from Debra White
Hi Chrissy :)
Your poem certainly meets the contest requirements and it's relatable!
I love the artwork you chose to accompany your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Chrissy :)
Your poem certainly meets the contest requirements and it's relatable!
I love the artwork you chose to accompany your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Debra, Thanks for your review a d good luck I think it will be needed LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I can relate to your poem. I've never won cash; I have won some member
dollars, which I gratefully used to promote my poems. Actually, correct wording would be "poem" instead of "subject." You could say "My subject is" and omit "about," but then the syllable count would be off.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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I can relate to your poem. I've never won cash; I have won some member
dollars, which I gratefully used to promote my poems. Actually, correct wording would be "poem" instead of "subject." You could say "My subject is" and omit "about," but then the syllable count would be off.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Janice, Me either seems to be an elusive quest to win a committe voted poem . Still I enjoy a bit of fun .Thanks for your comments but I will keep subject as that was the requirement in the rules any subject LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
Good luck with the contest Christine. I loved the picture, it was a good choice. The poem was short, sweet and rather impressive. If honesty prevailed I don't think anyone would say 'no' to a cash prize. lol
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Good luck with the contest Christine. I loved the picture, it was a good choice. The poem was short, sweet and rather impressive. If honesty prevailed I don't think anyone would say 'no' to a cash prize. lol
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Ary Thanks my friend for your review and no a cash prize would be accepted into my bank as it runs low with all the money spent here LOL .Cheers Christine Fingers crossed
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LOL what a shame Christine, you are so welcome.
