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A difficult birth
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Comment from
Earl Corp
I got what occurred from reading it. Your notes would help out someone who doesn't get the context that is one of the drawbacks to 100 word flash fiction. . Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
Pretty simple story Earl. Mare with breech birth needs the foal to be turned (just like a human) feet first! Thanks, K.
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Y. M. Roger
Always best to have a seasoned hand around when a foal or calf birth is breech ... a good entry for the contest! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
Thanks so much for reading. Yep, just like a human birth, baby needs to be turned - feet first without a rope!! Cheers, K.
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