Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Well done! Line and syllable count spot on for the specified rules (have to use all my characters LOL).You paint and vivid and serene picture in your few well chosen words. Good luck!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the clouds in the sky that create all kinds of forms for the dreamers to find what they see little dogs or lambs are hidden in the clouds above.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked it. It's fun to see what new formations are hidden in the clouds ... ;o)

Comment from DeborahWrite

Excellent

Dear Author,
I enjoyed your clear and well-written contest entry! "Cloud Creations" fashioned by winds is original (to me) and an excellent way to describe the origin of their formation.
My best, Deborah

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked it. I figured "fashioned" was a more poetic and artistic way to describe the process ... ;o)

reply by DeborahWrite on 15-Jun-2019

Wonderful! My pleasure!

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

To lay and discover the various cloud pictures. All in a day's work - I have trouble being still that long. Bad, huh? And the mosquitoes are bad this years and... lots of excuses for not seeing the beauty in everything.
Good reminder poem.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019

Thanks. It's best to watch the clouds without annoying mosquitoes buzzing about. Probably a cool, crisp, windy spring or fall day might be ideal. Appreciate your thoughts .. ;o)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I liked your sentiment of the cloud being fashionable and an example of day dreamers as we look up at the sky, the worst cloud is grey and dense which is what I am experiencing just now with rainy days, I look forward to seeing fresh innocent clouds floating by revealing a blue sky! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Hope you have many blue sky days where you can gaze at the fascinating cloud formations ... ;o)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
Very god description of the clouds and the effect they have on
anyone lucky enough to be a cloud watcher.
Excellent photo to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked it this 3-5-3 and the picture. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

I like these short verses, whether they are 3-5-3 or 5-7-5.

Your verse, combined with its illustration, is a very nice combo.

Daydreaming by daydreamers is a good sitting 'occupation' on a warm summer day: looking up into the sky and deciding the meaning of those Rorschach inspired cloud formations.

Best of luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked this 3-5-3 and picture. It's fun daydreaming and watching fascinating cloud formations. Appreciate your comments.
Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

You totally put into a whole perspective the cloud pictures made from the winds above... Very hard to do in so few words. Good luck in the contest this entry was really good!
Judy

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

This is a very bright and breezy offering for the contest -- the connection between clouds and daydreams (or the dreamers that watch as they pass by) is a wonderful visual! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Excellent

You did an awesome job with the limitations presented in this contest! The image you create is vivid with well chosen words! What's nicer than daydreaming watching the clouds go by-great job!

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019