Avoiding Rain:Drowns In the Sea
Hypocrites are not the worst21 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
I agree with our arguments. The hypocrisy or any negative somewhat proves the positive. If one exists so does the other. Faith does give
you ability to see this.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I agree with our arguments. The hypocrisy or any negative somewhat proves the positive. If one exists so does the other. Faith does give
you ability to see this.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I like the way you think...thanks for reviewing.
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You're welcome.
dp
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Avoid Rain:Drowns In The Sea", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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"Avoid Rain:Drowns In The Sea", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reading well in getting the point of the poem where several others didn't. God bless, Dennis
Dennis, my pen-pushing friend, it was my pleasure.
God bless you too,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Heather Knight
Very well written, thought-provoking poem.
I like it very much and the notes helped me understand it even better.
Thanks so much for sharing. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Very well written, thought-provoking poem.
I like it very much and the notes helped me understand it even better.
Thanks so much for sharing. Keep writing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reading well in getting the point of the poem where several others didn't. God bless, Dennis
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I don't think that non-believers are fakers. Everyone should have the choice to believe or not to believe, having this kind of tolerance presence wars and religion has caused it's fair share over history. Live and let live and allowing everyone to have their beliefs is the best way forward to keep the peace, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I don't think that non-believers are fakers. Everyone should have the choice to believe or not to believe, having this kind of tolerance presence wars and religion has caused it's fair share over history. Live and let live and allowing everyone to have their beliefs is the best way forward to keep the peace, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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With all due respect, I think you missed the point of my poem. Perhaps a reread? Thanks, Dennis
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My apologies Dennis if I misinterpreted your words here, love Dolly x
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No problem, I just wanted you to see the point I was attempting to make.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I would give you six stars for this, but I have used them all. What a beautiful faith poem. Your rhyme is excellent and your message good and clear. Very fine work.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I would give you six stars for this, but I have used them all. What a beautiful faith poem. Your rhyme is excellent and your message good and clear. Very fine work.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Dennis
Comment from Ben Colder
Over the years I have found the saying "Be still and know I am God" is appropriate in many situations. God is big enough to see the matter now and will handle things in time. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Over the years I have found the saying "Be still and know I am God" is appropriate in many situations. God is big enough to see the matter now and will handle things in time. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Truth in what you say, but does not relieve us of our obligation to speak for our Lord in controversial situations. Thanks for reviewing, Dennis
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Yep !
Comment from Janice Canerdy
ALL Christians are hypocritical at times. As your well-written couplets say,
that fact is not a legitimate excuse for others' rejecting the Lord as Savior.
Favorite couplet--the one about the counterfeit bill!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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ALL Christians are hypocritical at times. As your well-written couplets say,
that fact is not a legitimate excuse for others' rejecting the Lord as Savior.
Favorite couplet--the one about the counterfeit bill!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reading well in getting the point of the poem where several others didn't. God bless, Dennis
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very well written! The rhyme and rhythm were great!
And I agree with you. People need to think for themselves and not follow everyone else that doesn't think neither. Judgement day will come whether any one is ready of not!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Very well written! The rhyme and rhythm were great!
And I agree with you. People need to think for themselves and not follow everyone else that doesn't think neither. Judgement day will come whether any one is ready of not!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reading well in getting the point of the poem where several others didn't. God bless, Dennis
Comment from estory
I think this might actually be a better subject for a story than a poem. You can dig into the issues in a much more lively way by creating characters and conflicts, have the theme come alive in dialogue and action. In the poem, it comes off as kind of simplified. You did have a good example there with the counterfeit twenty in the real bills. People will come up with any excuse to declare themselves gods and not have to answer to anyone else. This is the mantra of today. people believe in science and worship computers. estory
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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I think this might actually be a better subject for a story than a poem. You can dig into the issues in a much more lively way by creating characters and conflicts, have the theme come alive in dialogue and action. In the poem, it comes off as kind of simplified. You did have a good example there with the counterfeit twenty in the real bills. People will come up with any excuse to declare themselves gods and not have to answer to anyone else. This is the mantra of today. people believe in science and worship computers. estory
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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I like what I wrote and how I wrote it. My experience on Fanstory tells me short and to the point is more effective and gets more reads. Thanks for commenting.
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
I have no more stars,you captured my attention from the first line to the last The artwork you choose to go with your poem
is right on point
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing this meaningful poem
Cookie
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Wow!
I have no more stars,you captured my attention from the first line to the last The artwork you choose to go with your poem
is right on point
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing this meaningful poem
Cookie
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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And thank you for your meaningful review! Appreciated!
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my pleasure
cookie
