I Can Sing But Cannot Dance
A poem I wrote with jut the first two lines in mind.15 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
I can't do either, so you have the advantage of me. I wish I could do both. As you write, it's best not to have regrets. Your faith in Christ has helped you overcome regrets. Your trust in Him carries you through. This is beautifully expressed. judi
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
I can't do either, so you have the advantage of me. I wish I could do both. As you write, it's best not to have regrets. Your faith in Christ has helped you overcome regrets. Your trust in Him carries you through. This is beautifully expressed. judi
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
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You're welcome. Take care. judi
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad you were inspired to create this spiritual poem from the simple beginning to a fully formed, symmetrical shape poem. Here's to never giving up! -Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
I am glad you were inspired to create this spiritual poem from the simple beginning to a fully formed, symmetrical shape poem. Here's to never giving up! -Joan
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The profoundness of your words permeates the reader's mind, letting us share your deep contentment with your past life and your faith in your future life because of your deep trust in God. Lovely! God Bless You.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
The profoundness of your words permeates the reader's mind, letting us share your deep contentment with your past life and your faith in your future life because of your deep trust in God. Lovely! God Bless You.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a cute poem, a strong tribute to your never faltering faith in the lord. The syllable count, counting foward then backwards must have been a challenge to do. Well for most of us, it was probably easy for you to do, nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
This is a cute poem, a strong tribute to your never faltering faith in the lord. The syllable count, counting foward then backwards must have been a challenge to do. Well for most of us, it was probably easy for you to do, nice job.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Carla Trinklein
What a blessing to be able to live without regrets! The key to that is knowing we've been forgiven by our Savior. Your poem is a beautiful reminder to all of us about what is truly important in life.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
What a blessing to be able to live without regrets! The key to that is knowing we've been forgiven by our Savior. Your poem is a beautiful reminder to all of us about what is truly important in life.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from susand3022
Good morning Patricia, I hope it's as beautiful there today as it is here. I love this poem... but your work is always graceful. I really like the way it's always aesthetically pleasing... your geometric shapes, I find pleasing to the eye. :) :)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
Good morning Patricia, I hope it's as beautiful there today as it is here. I love this poem... but your work is always graceful. I really like the way it's always aesthetically pleasing... your geometric shapes, I find pleasing to the eye. :) :)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
So well done. Shape poems are always fun but can be frustrating too to get them just right. Hold on to your faith, it is the only thing that really matters in this world, what we do for Christ. Well done. Rox
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
So well done. Shape poems are always fun but can be frustrating too to get them just right. Hold on to your faith, it is the only thing that really matters in this world, what we do for Christ. Well done. Rox
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a well composed poem, Patricia. I love singing in the choir and I know you do, too, so I identify with this. I used to dance, but we need a partner to dance so I don't do that anymore. Singing will continue as long as I'm able. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
This is a well composed poem, Patricia. I love singing in the choir and I know you do, too, so I identify with this. I used to dance, but we need a partner to dance so I don't do that anymore. Singing will continue as long as I'm able. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from misscookie
As always your words are very uplifting
Once again you are so on point
And captured my attention from the first like to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
As always your words are very uplifting
Once again you are so on point
And captured my attention from the first like to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the nice review.
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Your very welcome, have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem, Patricia. You did a great job with your syllables. Your lines flow smoothly with an awesome message. Love the picture, too. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Jan
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
I enjoyed your poem, Patricia. You did a great job with your syllables. Your lines flow smoothly with an awesome message. Love the picture, too. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Jan
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the nice review.