joy of life
a short poem5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, it is so very important to enjoy life... all part!! ... an uplifting and inspiring offering for the contest....! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) ;)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Oh, it is so very important to enjoy life... all part!! ... an uplifting and inspiring offering for the contest....! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) ;)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. It really is that simple, isn't it? Cheers,
Comment from SpiritedMuse
Good attempt. The Rhyme and the theme could be better. Also "Guru" - as a personified dispeller of darkness is usually more than just a teacher - the words make one presume is just a Yoga Asana teacher (which could be incorrect). Also the letter cases, can be paid more attention to.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Good attempt. The Rhyme and the theme could be better. Also "Guru" - as a personified dispeller of darkness is usually more than just a teacher - the words make one presume is just a Yoga Asana teacher (which could be incorrect). Also the letter cases, can be paid more attention to.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Welcome to fanstory and thanks for the insightful review. I look forward to reading your work. Cheers.
Comment from ShyWri
Great expression of two opposite approaches to finding contentment in life. Gurus recommend that we curb desires. Carpe diem, or Seize the Day, advises that we fully enjoy what life has to offer. Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Great expression of two opposite approaches to finding contentment in life. Gurus recommend that we curb desires. Carpe diem, or Seize the Day, advises that we fully enjoy what life has to offer. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. It really is that simple, to be grateful and appreciate life right now. If the only prayer you say is thank you...that is enough, cheers, j
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is a simple explanation for realising the key to life: stop over-complicating it by getting tangled up in other rationale systems and relax into gratitude and thereby find the joy. Your poem puts it very well.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Your poem is a simple explanation for realising the key to life: stop over-complicating it by getting tangled up in other rationale systems and relax into gratitude and thereby find the joy. Your poem puts it very well.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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It really is that simple. Sometimes we slip, but that is life. Thanks for the insightful review, cheers.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Good imagery and rhyme,
as well as a positive message.
-I like "seeking answers in the mist."
-I also like your take
on the "key to life."
-It is important to enjoy
what we have as often as possible.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Good imagery and rhyme,
as well as a positive message.
-I like "seeking answers in the mist."
-I also like your take
on the "key to life."
-It is important to enjoy
what we have as often as possible.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Such generous and concise reviews you write. It really is attitude and gratitude...and leaving a pleasant wake as we go. Cheers.
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You are quite welcome, and thanks for the lovely reply.
