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A 2-4-2 poem entry11 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--your tiny poem is so profound and perfectly matched by the mesmerizing artwork! I greatly admired your "seed" metaphor. Best wishes in the 2-4-2 Poetry contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Wow--your tiny poem is so profound and perfectly matched by the mesmerizing artwork! I greatly admired your "seed" metaphor. Best wishes in the 2-4-2 Poetry contest- Joan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments!
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, what a beautiful image to accompany your well written 2-4-2. Good theme and good luck in the contest. The seeds for change have to start somewhere. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Oh, what a beautiful image to accompany your well written 2-4-2. Good theme and good luck in the contest. The seeds for change have to start somewhere. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Always nice to hear from you. Thanks for dropping by.
Comment from patcelaw
In my life there have been many times that when I put thought into a situation I found it helped me to change. May your evening be blessed and your tomorrows be bright.
Patricia
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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In my life there have been many times that when I put thought into a situation I found it helped me to change. May your evening be blessed and your tomorrows be bright.
Patricia
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about a single thought that can lead to a big change if we allow it to grow and become a change for the better and enriching our lives.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about a single thought that can lead to a big change if we allow it to grow and become a change for the better and enriching our lives.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A quaint and poignant write as thoughts can set us off to make changes, I wish you luck with the contest June, short and sweet with plenty of promise, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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A quaint and poignant write as thoughts can set us off to make changes, I wish you luck with the contest June, short and sweet with plenty of promise, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from juliaSjames
Yes indeed
I believe our lives are influenced by our thoughts. The more we are aware of what we're thinking, the more we're able to change what no longer serves us.
Sprouting thoughts! Fantastic that you can conjure up such a vivid image in an 8 syllable poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Yes indeed
I believe our lives are influenced by our thoughts. The more we are aware of what we're thinking, the more we're able to change what no longer serves us.
Sprouting thoughts! Fantastic that you can conjure up such a vivid image in an 8 syllable poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
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You're welcome
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oooooh! Another good one today! You are on a ROLL, Woman!! I like the way you did "nourish" to make us think of "perish," the word that so often goes with "the thought." That was ingenious. GREAT title. And then, the 2-4-2 was equally great. Finally, that artwork! Absolutely perfect. This is one exceptional entry. I bet you it will be on top. xo
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Oooooh! Another good one today! You are on a ROLL, Woman!! I like the way you did "nourish" to make us think of "perish," the word that so often goes with "the thought." That was ingenious. GREAT title. And then, the 2-4-2 was equally great. Finally, that artwork! Absolutely perfect. This is one exceptional entry. I bet you it will be on top. xo
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
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It was one hundred percent my pleasure!! xo
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
It may be difficult enough to create a poem with seventeen syllables, but you accomplished it in last than half.
And the poem flows beautifully along.
IMHO Your selected illustration heightens the feeling.
Mark
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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June,
It may be difficult enough to create a poem with seventeen syllables, but you accomplished it in last than half.
And the poem flows beautifully along.
IMHO Your selected illustration heightens the feeling.
Mark
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad this poem resonated with you.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent 2-4-2 entry. Something as intangible as a thought can change the world. I love the image of a seed growing to the point of transforming the world. Inspirational. Hugh
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Excellent 2-4-2 entry. Something as intangible as a thought can change the world. I love the image of a seed growing to the point of transforming the world. Inspirational. Hugh
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad this poem resonated with you.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this, June. Every syllable carries it's weight. What I like best are the title and the photo. It's not that I like the photo so much. It's what you see in that photo that I like so much. Your poem borders on being an ekphrastic 2-4-2 poem, and that is awesome.
This should do very well. I would not change a syllable.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I like this, June. Every syllable carries it's weight. What I like best are the title and the photo. It's not that I like the photo so much. It's what you see in that photo that I like so much. Your poem borders on being an ekphrastic 2-4-2 poem, and that is awesome.
This should do very well. I would not change a syllable.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad this poem resonated with you.
