Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello Maria :)
I love to see flowers growing in the unlikeliest of places - they bring beauty to otherwise boring or ugly spots.
I enjoyed your story. Engaging and entertaining as always.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks so much for reading, Debra. I also like to see flowers growing in weird places.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Some flowers grow and thrive in the most inhospitable places - not only grow but manage to flower as well. They seem to have really strong characters.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks, Judy.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Yes, flowers draw our attention but especially the lone ones. They seems to grow where needed sometimes defying their surroundings. Sending you my nest today and hoping for flowers on your path,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks for reading, Sally. xxx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

I really enjoyed this short piece Maria. It is amazing what nature can create and have it survive under the strangest of situations. The impossible become possible and we get to enjoy the beauty. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks for your review. Have a lovely day.

reply by aryr on 13-Jun-2019

You are welcome Maria and you as well.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Aww, that was so sweet, lol, that delightful little flower bursting through asphalt to give a bright smile to passers-by. Your lovely stories always set me up for the day, this one was a gem! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks so much, Sandra. Take care.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Some children thrive despite their environment, and in store of their circumstance, they manage to be on top, good on these beautiful kids. And likewise delicate flowers thriving under pressure, beautfully written, blessings .Maria, blesings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks, Roy.

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

You have these flash fiction pieces down to a fine art :)

I like A splash of colour in the asphalt it feeds back into the loneliness and neglect.

The gentle twist is perhaps more appropriate here than a more forceful one; flowers sort of portray gentleness :)

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks, Alex. I do value your opinion.
BTW, I got an offer from the university. I just have to send them a translation of my degree certificate and my transcripts.

reply by Alex Rosel on 12-Jun-2019

That's good news :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We always need to point these treasures out to children as they will be nurtured by them and realise never to stop hoping and striving for the best in life just as like that yellow beauty did, a fine write Maria, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks, Dolly. 😘

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

This is a good lesson for children for several situations. It's never too early to encourage appreciation. Thank you for sharing your writing talent
Hugs, Trisha

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019

Thanks.xxx

reply by Bucketlist on 12-Jun-2019

No problem