A Sum of the Parts
We are all unique compositions53 total reviews
Comment from Tpa
it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thanks very much, TPA.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I wish I had more six's to hand out :(
I love the humor in the poem, the positive attitude and playfulness as you describe yourself.
I love the title and the artwork you chose; they and your poem appear as they were made for each other.
Awesome :)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I wish I had more six's to hand out :(
I love the humor in the poem, the positive attitude and playfulness as you describe yourself.
I love the title and the artwork you chose; they and your poem appear as they were made for each other.
Awesome :)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much.
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The pleasure was all mine. This was a fantastic poem. Truly.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is so fun and light-hearted. I just love it. The rhyming makes allows the reader to bounce along with the words like your in a sing-along. Very fun and playful.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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This is so fun and light-hearted. I just love it. The rhyming makes allows the reader to bounce along with the words like your in a sing-along. Very fun and playful.
Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Oh, hahah! I love that: a sing along!! Thank you, Mia; that just made my day.
Comment from Fred Fitzsimmons
I could picture you in this poem both physically and emotionally. You've got a nice way with portraying your view of yourself and your feelings. All are nicely tied together in five tight little stories that make for an enjoyable poem to read. Nice job. Best to you.
F.J.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I could picture you in this poem both physically and emotionally. You've got a nice way with portraying your view of yourself and your feelings. All are nicely tied together in five tight little stories that make for an enjoyable poem to read. Nice job. Best to you.
F.J.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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What a really nice review this is, Fred. Thanks for all the good feedback.
Comment from Colin John
Why don't I get all your posts that's what I want to know? Anyhow I hope you done well today with the book and the note was meeeee lol x
Yes I get the feeling that you are as you say you are and would not want to cross you with your flaming red hair lol.. But I am used to it with my lot thankfully not full grown yet lol. Greaaat poem and I feel I know you now and will tread carefully. Kind regards Colin XX
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Why don't I get all your posts that's what I want to know? Anyhow I hope you done well today with the book and the note was meeeee lol x
Yes I get the feeling that you are as you say you are and would not want to cross you with your flaming red hair lol.. But I am used to it with my lot thankfully not full grown yet lol. Greaaat poem and I feel I know you now and will tread carefully. Kind regards Colin XX
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Hahahaha. Maybe because they're blind contests you don't get notifications? That all I can think of.
Thanks for this very fun review.
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Yes hope it's gone and yes did get the others I read them through xx
Comment from Joy Graham
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a fun poem that allows readers to get to know you. We'll know you even better when the contest is over and we can discover your name. Such a fun mystery contest :)
Now who do I know with red hair that can get mean? All in fun. I can wait, honest.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a fun poem that allows readers to get to know you. We'll know you even better when the contest is over and we can discover your name. Such a fun mystery contest :)
Now who do I know with red hair that can get mean? All in fun. I can wait, honest.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Any redhead worth her salt is the answer to THAT question!!!
Thanks for the delightful review.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
So many little gems in this piece. I especially liked the humor aspect. Life can be so crazy, some times we need to see or find the humor in it. And writing is indeed a creative outlet, that allows us to express and play emotionally. Excellent. Hugh
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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So many little gems in this piece. I especially liked the humor aspect. Life can be so crazy, some times we need to see or find the humor in it. And writing is indeed a creative outlet, that allows us to express and play emotionally. Excellent. Hugh
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Ohhhh, yes! Humor is a must-have in this life! I shudder to think where I'd be without it.
Thank you for the warm and wonderful review, Hugh.
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match Your word made me feel good and happy inside.
I than The Lord everyday I'm a live
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match Your word made me feel good and happy inside.
I than The Lord everyday I'm a live
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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What a lovely review, Miss Cookie! Thank you for your delightful words.
Comment from Mastery
Good entry for the poetry Bio contest, author. Question though? why did you not complete the word "God" in the fourth stanza? Good luck in the contest. I wish you well with this piece. Bob
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Good entry for the poetry Bio contest, author. Question though? why did you not complete the word "God" in the fourth stanza? Good luck in the contest. I wish you well with this piece. Bob
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I will tell you after identities have been shown because that could give mine away.
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I don't see how, but it' your post. LOL Bob
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I guess you'll just have to stay tuned! LOL!
Comment from susand3022
Dear Author, I really like your Bio Poem. I want to let you know that I only had one word for the second line in your final stanza... 'and'. I fully expect this to be a FS glitch. I tried to reload a couple of times but that didn't do anything for me. It may have messed up your post when you were in the Advanced Editor. I've had that happen to me before. You'll want to check on it! A really cute poem, tells a lot about you :)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Dear Author, I really like your Bio Poem. I want to let you know that I only had one word for the second line in your final stanza... 'and'. I fully expect this to be a FS glitch. I tried to reload a couple of times but that didn't do anything for me. It may have messed up your post when you were in the Advanced Editor. I've had that happen to me before. You'll want to check on it! A really cute poem, tells a lot about you :)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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It shows up for me as the entire sentence, but thank you for having my back. And thank you for the nice review, too.
