A Sum of the Parts
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Comment from Sylvia Page
Hello Rachelle
It is certainly a fun poem about your life and personality and your ambitions.
I'm generally nice,
but I can get mean.
Well said!
Best regards
Sylvia
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hello Rachelle
It is certainly a fun poem about your life and personality and your ambitions.
I'm generally nice,
but I can get mean.
Well said!
Best regards
Sylvia
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Sylvia. I appreciate this very nice review! xo
Comment from Raul1
It is awesome in thinking big in our careers. I like your personality. I think that your dark side can be erased and be a happy person. I like this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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It is awesome in thinking big in our careers. I like your personality. I think that your dark side can be erased and be a happy person. I like this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Raul1.
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You're welcome.
Comment from rjuselius
indeed, writing poems is really not a matter of want but rather a must. our muse is awake all around the clock not knowing when inspiration attacks.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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indeed, writing poems is really not a matter of want but rather a must. our muse is awake all around the clock not knowing when inspiration attacks.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much! I appreciate the nice review. xo
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Yes, God probably gave you lots of good things. I'm glad you like yourself. Trying to see you even more in my mind's eye. That's what poetry does: forces to see what we sometimes can't see. I do a lot of this kind of looking.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Yes, God probably gave you lots of good things. I'm glad you like yourself. Trying to see you even more in my mind's eye. That's what poetry does: forces to see what we sometimes can't see. I do a lot of this kind of looking.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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That's why you're a writer!!!
Thanks for the fun review. xo
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Thanks for the review of my review, Sparkles.
Comment from Bill Schott
This biographical poem, The Sum of Parts, has a fun tone to it and reminds me a bit of my motivations for keeping my writing on the light side. Love this part:
G-d gave me humor
and then He bestowed
many chances to need it.
Yes, that's irony.
The use of 'alacrity' is different than I've seen. Fun.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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This biographical poem, The Sum of Parts, has a fun tone to it and reminds me a bit of my motivations for keeping my writing on the light side. Love this part:
G-d gave me humor
and then He bestowed
many chances to need it.
Yes, that's irony.
The use of 'alacrity' is different than I've seen. Fun.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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That words seems to be troubling many of the members. I use that word a lot, so I've been surprised about it. Guess I'll just put my sense of humor in gear and move on!
Thanks for the review, Bill. xo
Comment from Holly Buss
I really enjoyed this poem! It speaks to how everything we have was given to us by God. You perfectly captured the essence of personalities and emotions, though it is a little hard to understand with all the large words. Have a blessed day!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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I really enjoyed this poem! It speaks to how everything we have was given to us by God. You perfectly captured the essence of personalities and emotions, though it is a little hard to understand with all the large words. Have a blessed day!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Holly.
Comment from moongirlwriter
OMGsh.. .I have a kindred spirit on this site. Thanks for being on fs and sharing your writing. This is how I live my life as well. . .I just need to add grandchildren. :) The very best with this delightful poem, hope to visit your writing again.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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OMGsh.. .I have a kindred spirit on this site. Thanks for being on fs and sharing your writing. This is how I live my life as well. . .I just need to add grandchildren. :) The very best with this delightful poem, hope to visit your writing again.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I'd love that!! Thanks for the very nice review.
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I just couldn't find your name to add you to my list. :)
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This is a wonderful, quick little read of who you are. The shortness packs in quite a bit of info, which is poetically quite a neat trick. You gave a bit of physical description, but told more about your inner self and personality, which is WHO we really are. I like this very much and think you did a great job with it. Love the puzzle pieces for a visual. Great choice. Good Luck!
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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This is a wonderful, quick little read of who you are. The shortness packs in quite a bit of info, which is poetically quite a neat trick. You gave a bit of physical description, but told more about your inner self and personality, which is WHO we really are. I like this very much and think you did a great job with it. Love the puzzle pieces for a visual. Great choice. Good Luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks for noticing so much here, Wendy. That's always so helpful when a reviewer does that. And thanks, too, for the well-wishes for the contest!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
This is an excellent contest entry and I enjoyed your verses, which sum to a whole person from its candid parts! Your choice of words creates a realistic Bio and you come across honest and fun!
My best in winning, Deborah.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Dear Author,
This is an excellent contest entry and I enjoyed your verses, which sum to a whole person from its candid parts! Your choice of words creates a realistic Bio and you come across honest and fun!
My best in winning, Deborah.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this really encouraging and helpful review, Deborah. I love reading what 'connected' with a reviewer, and you have done that so well here.
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You are welcome and My pleasure!
Comment from bob cullen
I loved this. What a fantastic philosophy to adhere too, you'd certainly get six stars for that belief. Good luck in the contest and thank you for bringing a smile to my face
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I loved this. What a fantastic philosophy to adhere too, you'd certainly get six stars for that belief. Good luck in the contest and thank you for bringing a smile to my face
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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You did, likewise, for my face when I read this review! So, thank you for that. I appreciate your kind words very much.
