Time After Time After Time After
The cliches of time as time marches on.29 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I love what you have done here, perhaps the connection to the Lauper song is part of it. One of my favorites. Great choice of artwork! The poem itself is fantastic. My husband is forever reminding me we should live in the joys of each living day as they are numbered. Your phrase "time is now, not then" jumps out and grabs me. I tend to keep waiting for the big event and the big event is happening by the moment. This is very well written and the overall effect is fantastic.
Wendy
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I love what you have done here, perhaps the connection to the Lauper song is part of it. One of my favorites. Great choice of artwork! The poem itself is fantastic. My husband is forever reminding me we should live in the joys of each living day as they are numbered. Your phrase "time is now, not then" jumps out and grabs me. I tend to keep waiting for the big event and the big event is happening by the moment. This is very well written and the overall effect is fantastic.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
Comment from misscookie
I love the art work you choose to go with your poem
They are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last Your words were fill wit truth and compassion
This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing
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I love the art work you choose to go with your poem
They are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last Your words were fill wit truth and compassion
This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is so beautiful, passionate, and romantic. It expresses great feelings and emotions. I love the beautiful and colorful wording you use in this. The flow is flawless and I like the descriptive wording you use. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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This is so beautiful, passionate, and romantic. It expresses great feelings and emotions. I love the beautiful and colorful wording you use in this. The flow is flawless and I like the descriptive wording you use. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
Comment from ShyWri
A clever look at Time and the ways we think and speak about it. I recently heard Cyndi's song on the radio and learned that she got the title from a TV Guide listing of movies; she didn't know it referred to a wonderfully-romantic scifi film based on HG Wells' The Time Machine.
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A clever look at Time and the ways we think and speak about it. I recently heard Cyndi's song on the radio and learned that she got the title from a TV Guide listing of movies; she didn't know it referred to a wonderfully-romantic scifi film based on HG Wells' The Time Machine.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I seem to remember the song. But I may be wrong. I'll look it up. I loved your poem about love and time, and I adore the painting from Dali. I'm a great admirer of his art. Good luck. All best. Ulla:))
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Hi there, I seem to remember the song. But I may be wrong. I'll look it up. I loved your poem about love and time, and I adore the painting from Dali. I'm a great admirer of his art. Good luck. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have good use of alliteration, and allusion. And some onomatopoetic words. I especially like your last stanza. you have an amusing use of different sources. How appropriate that you employ snipets of song lyrics. Music is very significant in relationships, beginning them, ending them and grieving the loss. This is cleverly orchestrated.
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You have good use of alliteration, and allusion. And some onomatopoetic words. I especially like your last stanza. you have an amusing use of different sources. How appropriate that you employ snipets of song lyrics. Music is very significant in relationships, beginning them, ending them and grieving the loss. This is cleverly orchestrated.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your excellent, well-written poem about time. I also loved your last line and Dali's, "...Memory"! His time pieces may morph through time but our memories persist, and thus, so does our 'true' love.
Thank you for sharing this poem. Deborah
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your excellent, well-written poem about time. I also loved your last line and Dali's, "...Memory"! His time pieces may morph through time but our memories persist, and thus, so does our 'true' love.
Thank you for sharing this poem. Deborah
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
Comment from LisaMay
I really enjoyed your poem for various reasons: Like you, I find myself thinking about time very often in regards to relationships; also I love the Dali painting you have used, I love Virgil, and I love Cyndi Lauper's song Time after Time (but especially Girls just wanna have fun!)
I like your alliteration here; With each precious and sensual sound sent soaring
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I really enjoyed your poem for various reasons: Like you, I find myself thinking about time very often in regards to relationships; also I love the Dali painting you have used, I love Virgil, and I love Cyndi Lauper's song Time after Time (but especially Girls just wanna have fun!)
I like your alliteration here; With each precious and sensual sound sent soaring
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
Comment from royowen
This is a great poem in the argument of time, I think time is an anomaly in the fabric of infinity. And it can't determine returning to a specific event, moments stand alone, and have their own personality. A beustifully written piece, with the oft said. Love is the only constant, I guess sin could be added to that, but I think hate can't last, it destroys itself, well done great non set meter, quatrains and abab rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
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This is a great poem in the argument of time, I think time is an anomaly in the fabric of infinity. And it can't determine returning to a specific event, moments stand alone, and have their own personality. A beustifully written piece, with the oft said. Love is the only constant, I guess sin could be added to that, but I think hate can't last, it destroys itself, well done great non set meter, quatrains and abab rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
All the short 3 word sayings in the poem elude to time melting away like the melting clocks in the artwork also how love doesn't melt away.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
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All the short 3 word sayings in the poem elude to time melting away like the melting clocks in the artwork also how love doesn't melt away.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
