Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Chapter Six, Part 2"It was their world long before our existence...
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Comment from poetwatch
Me and my shadow typing all night long, right Yvette? Don't lose it, you had me running around in circles for a moment. Kato and Koko so close together had me reading for a while. As long as there is peace and order in the Refuge the Order can do nothing. I don't know what spell you is going to weave for Maggie, but I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Me and my shadow typing all night long, right Yvette? Don't lose it, you had me running around in circles for a moment. Kato and Koko so close together had me reading for a while. As long as there is peace and order in the Refuge the Order can do nothing. I don't know what spell you is going to weave for Maggie, but I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Got some strong personalities housing together and sometimes there are spats... happens in the best of circumstances and this certainly is not that! ;) ;) LOL! Thanx for hanging with me, Jose -- YOU are so appreciated, sir!! ;) ;) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Debbie Pope
This six is for your incredible imagination. You have so many characters and each one is amazingly creative. For instance, I find Lyca and her mood changing tattoos just so interesting. However do you keep up with the various characters and their peculiar traits?
It's good to be back in the story. I am ready for Maggie to arrive and handle this strange group.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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This six is for your incredible imagination. You have so many characters and each one is amazingly creative. For instance, I find Lyca and her mood changing tattoos just so interesting. However do you keep up with the various characters and their peculiar traits?
It's good to be back in the story. I am ready for Maggie to arrive and handle this strange group.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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So, you are going to officially spoil me or make blush enough that I don't have to go out in the sun... THANK YOU so VERY much for these lovely stars, Debbie -- you really make me feel like I'm ten feet tall and I am so very grateful for you!
And, tomorrow's writing starts with Maggie and Addy leaving the apartment... .probably won't post it tomorrow since I need to build up a bit of a 'cache' with my mom coming to visit next week! Mom's don't get the whole 'computer time' you know? :) :) It's okay, I wouldn't want to be on the computer while she's here anyway as I get to see her so rarely! ;) ;)
You take care of you and thank you again, Beautiful Lady Deb! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! Did you use the "book ballon?" I always wondered how that was supposed to work. Great idea for your readers!!
I'm still trying remember who is who but I got the drama of the near clash - with the matching weather. I like the cool changing tatoos.
One grammar point in your preview:
"Gathering Room for he and Addy." (him) because it's the object of the preposition 'for.'
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Wow! Did you use the "book ballon?" I always wondered how that was supposed to work. Great idea for your readers!!
I'm still trying remember who is who but I got the drama of the near clash - with the matching weather. I like the cool changing tatoos.
One grammar point in your preview:
"Gathering Room for he and Addy." (him) because it's the object of the preposition 'for.'
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Yeah -- it's a book balloon.... don't think it will do any good, but who knows? I thought I'd give it a try since I had a little extra funny-money this time (lol!) so, we'll see! :) ;) And thanx for the catch there, ma'am -- very much appreciated! :) Take care, Professor, and take care of you! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
You get a 6 simply because it's HERE!!!!! IT'S HERE!!! IT'S REALLY HERE!!! You made me think Maddy and Addy were getting here... they aren't here yet Yvette! I suppose I deserve it though... After all, I did the same thing to you last week didn't I? lol, Told you that this week would be the one... then it wasn't! LOL, I promise! It's next week!!! You have to promise too though My Good Lady of the South!!! :) :) :)
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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You get a 6 simply because it's HERE!!!!! IT'S HERE!!! IT'S REALLY HERE!!! You made me think Maddy and Addy were getting here... they aren't here yet Yvette! I suppose I deserve it though... After all, I did the same thing to you last week didn't I? lol, Told you that this week would be the one... then it wasn't! LOL, I promise! It's next week!!! You have to promise too though My Good Lady of the South!!! :) :) :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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You spoil me, O Lady of the Northeast!! And here is my promise: the next time my fingers hit the keyboard (after lunch today!) they will be leaving the apartment/headed to the airport! And I do promise that it will be an interesting arrival when they reach Allowance... How's that? It's the best I can do without giving more away... ! ;);) Thank you so very much for your support, Beautiful Friend.... and just in case I haven't told you in a while, you ROCK! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Yvette... all I need to know is that they're going to get to the Refuge and there will be some sort of interaction before the end of the chapter!!! LOL
