The Bell Tolls-For A Lost Poet
Written in a sonnet style56 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
I'm sorry for your loss, but what a lovely tribute to someone who sounds as though he were a very special man. Your poem reflects great respect and admiration, and every rhyme hits the mark. He would undoubtedly have been very grateful.
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I'm sorry for your loss, but what a lovely tribute to someone who sounds as though he were a very special man. Your poem reflects great respect and admiration, and every rhyme hits the mark. He would undoubtedly have been very grateful.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
Comment from Sophia Delgado
This is a beautiful memoir and a lovely poem. I greatly enjoyed reading it.
There are a couple of typos; did you mean "godly man"? There is also an "I" after the first paragraph, and a 5 after line three of the second paragraph.
Thank you for sharing!
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This is a beautiful memoir and a lovely poem. I greatly enjoyed reading it.
There are a couple of typos; did you mean "godly man"? There is also an "I" after the first paragraph, and a 5 after line three of the second paragraph.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful tribute poem to a good friend... it is certainly a wonderfully melodic send-off for a poet! ;) :) I've included a couple of fixes below.... :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
brief span.I He was --> brief span. He was
meant to be5 --> meant to be
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A wonderful tribute poem to a good friend... it is certainly a wonderfully melodic send-off for a poet! ;) :) I've included a couple of fixes below.... :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
brief span.I He was --> brief span. He was
meant to be5 --> meant to be
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
Comment from susand3022
Hi Jay, I'm so very sorry to hear about the loss of your good friend. Something like that is never easy but I'm sure his heart is warmed by this lovely tribute that you have written for him. :)
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Hi Jay, I'm so very sorry to hear about the loss of your good friend. Something like that is never easy but I'm sure his heart is warmed by this lovely tribute that you have written for him. :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very good poem and tribute to your friend. I particularly like the first stanza. One typo you need to check
Third stanza hin (him). Very well written in perfect rhyme as usual. Take care. Jen.
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This is a very good poem and tribute to your friend. I particularly like the first stanza. One typo you need to check
Third stanza hin (him). Very well written in perfect rhyme as usual. Take care. Jen.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm sorry for your loss and this is a warm and sentimental tribute and I liked the meter and rhymes. Just one suggestion for the penultimate line, remove (the) and leave (poetry) in full. Love Dolly x
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I'm sorry for your loss and this is a warm and sentimental tribute and I liked the meter and rhymes. Just one suggestion for the penultimate line, remove (the) and leave (poetry) in full. Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
