St Louis
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "St. Louis Chapter 6 part 3"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
20 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Now it looks like I didn't your last two postings.
So my question should I stop felling that McKenzie
doesn't want to believe anyone would harm her, but Logan feels it's his job to protect her from the threat?
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
  |
Hello Barb
Now it looks like I didn't your last two postings.
So my question should I stop felling that McKenzie
doesn't want to believe anyone would harm her, but Logan feels it's his job to protect her from the threat?
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
-
Logan has his hands full with Mac. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
-
You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from SLMorrical
Wonderful chapter. It adds to the building of Mac and Logan's relationship. It's nice that they have the same old fashion values. I think this conversation is a preview of what is to come with the two of them. Well done. This flows very well. I can picture the two of them during this conversation. I can just see Mac working in her mind the comment of being bossy. I look forward to the next chapter. I like these two characters and how they interact.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
 |
Wonderful chapter. It adds to the building of Mac and Logan's relationship. It's nice that they have the same old fashion values. I think this conversation is a preview of what is to come with the two of them. Well done. This flows very well. I can picture the two of them during this conversation. I can just see Mac working in her mind the comment of being bossy. I look forward to the next chapter. I like these two characters and how they interact.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
-
Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from diamondbogle
I liked your story. I thought it flowed nicely and I didnt see any major mistakes. I like that it can be read sort of independent of the original story but yet it makes me want to read previous chapters. Good job.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
|
I liked your story. I thought it flowed nicely and I didnt see any major mistakes. I like that it can be read sort of independent of the original story but yet it makes me want to read previous chapters. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
-
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
When it comes to the right woman to catch Logan's eye, I'll bet it's someone like Mackenzie, (just a guess) Mack has been investigation another case of a wayward husband,mall while she has been having an affair herself, and will share what she knows about him. Well done Barbara, great episode, blessings, Roy
Typo : Except when it comes (to) this.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
|
When it comes to the right woman to catch Logan's eye, I'll bet it's someone like Mackenzie, (just a guess) Mack has been investigation another case of a wayward husband,mall while she has been having an affair herself, and will share what she knows about him. Well done Barbara, great episode, blessings, Roy
Typo : Except when it comes (to) this.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
-
Thank you for the catch. I have a bad habit of leaving out those small words and when I edit, I read it as if it's there. I appreciate the help.
-
Most welckme Barbara
Comment from bhogg
Just the one slight spot below. I admire the way your writing is so smooth. You at least pull this reader in every time. Interesting dialog between the two.
comes this (to this)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
|
Just the one slight spot below. I admire the way your writing is so smooth. You at least pull this reader in every time. Interesting dialog between the two.
comes this (to this)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
-
Thank you for the catch. I have a bad habit of leaving out those small words and when I edit, I read it as if it's there. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Ben Colder
Looks like the two are chipping away the fronts and getting down to reality. I'm sure she will come to know the girl real soon by looking in the mirror. LOL.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
|
Looks like the two are chipping away the fronts and getting down to reality. I'm sure she will come to know the girl real soon by looking in the mirror. LOL.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
-
I think so too. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Still great reading as you always provide. I said it someplace else but glad there are still some of you folks not gone on vacation so we can have something worthwhile to read and review. Good work. Keep it coming.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
|
Still great reading as you always provide. I said it someplace else but glad there are still some of you folks not gone on vacation so we can have something worthwhile to read and review. Good work. Keep it coming.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
-
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tootsie55
Loved this chapter. Hope you are not disappearing on Vacation like a lot of the "Up Over" crowd are getting ready to do leaving us "Down Under" and others aloof with no one to read and enjoy and review. One spag only except when it comes (to)this."
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
|
Loved this chapter. Hope you are not disappearing on Vacation like a lot of the "Up Over" crowd are getting ready to do leaving us "Down Under" and others aloof with no one to read and enjoy and review. One spag only except when it comes (to)this."
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
-
Thank you for the catch. I have a bad habit of leaving out those small words and when I edit, I read it as if it's there. I appreciate the help. I will be going on vacation, but I will still post because I have written ahead. LOL
-
So glad to hear you will still be around to read.
Comment from 24chas
A very interesting chapter, Barbara. It seems like maybe Mac is warming up toward Logan even more and now she seems to be on her way to thinking about him in a different way. Good job.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
|
A very interesting chapter, Barbara. It seems like maybe Mac is warming up toward Logan even more and now she seems to be on her way to thinking about him in a different way. Good job.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
-
I think their relationship, is going to hit Mac like a brick wall. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, do I smell romance here? I loved the chapter and the great dialogue. Very well written. So what's next?
but you're not a traditional gal, except when it comes it = ..., except when it comes to this.
All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
|
Hi Barbara, do I smell romance here? I loved the chapter and the great dialogue. Very well written. So what's next?
but you're not a traditional gal, except when it comes it = ..., except when it comes to this.
All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
-
Thank you for the catch. I have a bad habit of leaving out those small words and when I edit, I read it as if it's there. I appreciate the help.
