Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Joan. I enjoyed your poem for the upcoming post for Picture This. I think this image epitomizes the word "passion" which you describe so well here. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks for the positive feedback, Marilyn.
Have a great week.
Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

With your love you will defend both of your lives until the end, your whisperings and yours will gain lessening your pain; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thank you very much for the review and high rating.
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Comment from bhogg

Excellent

less that a shou (did you mean 'than' a shout). Short and sweet, easy to read with a pleasant rhyme scheme. Must admit that the artwork is puzzling! Regards, Bill

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks for the review. The t is there. The artwork was provided. You had to write a poem in response to it.
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reply by bhogg on 10-Jun-2019

I knew that about the artwork. Not sure what I would have done with it. In any event, not as well as you!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Until the End, presented in rhyming couplets, seems to explain to one another that love has its emotional challenges, but love deals the wild card to keep your chips high. (I guess it's in the cards.)

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks for your support, Bill.
Joan

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

It is good to have someone to talk with, share your deepest feelings and someone to love - for a long, long time. True love takes time and is not always easy.
Nice poem.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate both.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A passionate and praise worthy write, emotions can often raise heat when love is in the mix, and you are prepared to defend it until the end, I loved those last two lines, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

I appreciate your continued support, Dolly. Thanks for the review.
Joan

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Your poem speaks of pain of two from two directions, but each there for each other. Helping each other make it to the end. A bittersweet song.
God Bless!
Patty

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks for the kind words and generous rating, Patty
~Joan

reply by Patty Palmer on 09-Jun-2019

you're welcome!