Assassin Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Before the Next Chapter"A sequel to the novel Baker's Dozen
10 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What a great idea this was (for me any way) as I hope for all your readers of this story it should save some back tracking between chapters, as usual very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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What a great idea this was (for me any way) as I hope for all your readers of this story it should save some back tracking between chapters, as usual very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Glad it was helpful. Thanks for going through it all.
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My Friend, I usually "go through" things because I have too you know like work, I am reading this story because I find it to my liking, I don't often read much (never have) I enjoy this very much and liked every bit I've read, keep writing it or others and I'm sure I'll join in****kahpot
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This full update is very handy, and I'm sure I'll need to refer back to it from time to time to keep the history of these events in order in my mind, so thanks! Looking forward to the next one!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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This full update is very handy, and I'm sure I'll need to refer back to it from time to time to keep the history of these events in order in my mind, so thanks! Looking forward to the next one!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for this recap, Bill. You have some intriguing characters and it sounds like you have some mysteries to unravel in the process. Hoping to see Baker and GI Joe back in the future posts.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thanks for this recap, Bill. You have some intriguing characters and it sounds like you have some mysteries to unravel in the process. Hoping to see Baker and GI Joe back in the future posts.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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They might appear in a flashback, but they are in the body count now.
Comment from Earl Corp
I appreciate the catch up, it's been a while since the last chapter. I guess we all get caught up in doing other things, but I'm glad to see you back at it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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I appreciate the catch up, it's been a while since the last chapter. I guess we all get caught up in doing other things, but I'm glad to see you back at it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Earl
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
WOW! There's lots going on here. I can't wait to read it as it sounds like a real attention grabber. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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WOW! There's lots going on here. I can't wait to read it as it sounds like a real attention grabber. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thanks, MA
Comment from nomi338
Great. You chose the perfect cliff to leave me hanging on, waiting for the next show to drop. You are getting very good at torture you know. You get me all heated up and raring to go with more unrelenting violence and gore, then leave me salivating, in anticipation of more to come, with the heartbreaking message: More to come. argh!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Great. You chose the perfect cliff to leave me hanging on, waiting for the next show to drop. You are getting very good at torture you know. You get me all heated up and raring to go with more unrelenting violence and gore, then leave me salivating, in anticipation of more to come, with the heartbreaking message: More to come. argh!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Sorry, nomi
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It's alright man, You're still my dog. Woof, woof!
Comment from Gianinas
Thank you for the color highlights, it made the chapter easy to read and understand. A range of emotions and my blood pressure were raised during the reading. Intriguing writing, that gave me some food for thought, even though I understand it as a fictional piece.
Gianina
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the color highlights, it made the chapter easy to read and understand. A range of emotions and my blood pressure were raised during the reading. Intriguing writing, that gave me some food for thought, even though I understand it as a fictional piece.
Gianina
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This is just a summary of what is already available to read. Now we can go on.
Comment from barkingdog
In the Assassin Nation opening paragraph, you said Samantha killed the President, making it look like a heart attack. How can the VP order the President's death if the President is already dead? I may have missed something.
You have a fine plot line. Now to fill it in with description of actions and places and pertinent dialogue.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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In the Assassin Nation opening paragraph, you said Samantha killed the President, making it look like a heart attack. How can the VP order the President's death if the President is already dead? I may have missed something.
You have a fine plot line. Now to fill it in with description of actions and places and pertinent dialogue.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This was a reduction of a book and its sequel so far. The dialogue and expanded text is available in my portfolio. I was actually reminding my readers where we left off.
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I enjoyed the plot. It should turn out to be quite a read.
Comment from royowen
Of course, I've been following your story Bill, very much like the intrigue that seems to follow people of great power, such as the president of the US, and such like, this has been an entertainment delight. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Of course, I've been following your story Bill, very much like the intrigue that seems to follow people of great power, such as the president of the US, and such like, this has been an entertainment delight. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Roy, for the kind support. Bill
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Most welcome
Comment from Cindy Warren
This sounds like it should be good. I missed the last one, but I think I should be able to pick up the new story. Maybe a little catching up. You can't trust the government at all, huh?
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This sounds like it should be good. I missed the last one, but I think I should be able to pick up the new story. Maybe a little catching up. You can't trust the government at all, huh?
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Cindy
