Your'e as young as you feel
Go for it. We're a long time dead.5 total reviews
Comment from jeSSaNN
Very very cute as well as specific in point that you may be older but you still got it going on!! Keeping it real! I loved it and encouraged all woman to notice that we all have something special in all the years we carry and wiser as well. Thanks for making sure that with age comes beauty and also wisdom too!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
Very very cute as well as specific in point that you may be older but you still got it going on!! Keeping it real! I loved it and encouraged all woman to notice that we all have something special in all the years we carry and wiser as well. Thanks for making sure that with age comes beauty and also wisdom too!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thanks Jessica for the great review. Much appreciated. By the way I don't look like the picture thankfully. X
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hi, good attempt to be humorous, but alas, for me it was bad taste. Sorry, but I believe in growing old graciously, not distastefully, but I think the picture you've chosen suits the writing. Thanks for sharing your poem, I think.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
Hi, good attempt to be humorous, but alas, for me it was bad taste. Sorry, but I believe in growing old graciously, not distastefully, but I think the picture you've chosen suits the writing. Thanks for sharing your poem, I think.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Each to their own.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like me! But doesn't look like me! He he he, I loved the fun in this write, you're never to old to live life to the full. Your Title should read: (You're) as young as you feel. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
This sounds like me! But doesn't look like me! He he he, I loved the fun in this write, you're never to old to live life to the full. Your Title should read: (You're) as young as you feel. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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It is also pretty much me but not the picture. Thanks for spotting the typo, I've changed it. Thanks a lot Dolly for the review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, this is just hilarious! :) The reader cannot help but seriously chuckle with the combination of your words and that pic!! ;) ;) Although, I am seriously hoping that 'nookie' and this pic are not on the same wavelength!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
Okay, this is just hilarious! :) The reader cannot help but seriously chuckle with the combination of your words and that pic!! ;) ;) Although, I am seriously hoping that 'nookie' and this pic are not on the same wavelength!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Ha ha. Great review. Thanks Yvette.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem reminds us to keep moving all the time so we can be as spry as this old lady. I guess writing is one thing that keeps you young. Though I'd stop smoking cigars for her teeth are showing the effects.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
This poem reminds us to keep moving all the time so we can be as spry as this old lady. I guess writing is one thing that keeps you young. Though I'd stop smoking cigars for her teeth are showing the effects.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for your review.
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No problem.
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