Obsessive Tendencies
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Her Obsession"An Unlikely Journey Toward Reconstruction
38 total reviews
Comment from Rikki66
I am reminded of Natalie Wood in Rebel Without a Cause and Splendor in the grass the flitty girl next door in love with the bad boy. I tried my best to be the wolf when I was young, but I was never the leader of the pack. Good store well written.
Rikki
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I am reminded of Natalie Wood in Rebel Without a Cause and Splendor in the grass the flitty girl next door in love with the bad boy. I tried my best to be the wolf when I was young, but I was never the leader of the pack. Good store well written.
Rikki
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh my goodness, Rikki -- I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you've jumped on board with me!! ;) I do love a good romance and what better than a wolf and a fairy, yeah?!! ;) :) LOL! Of course, there shall never be another Rebel like James Dean, but I'm hoping that Gregor has his own appeal - wink, wink! ;) Thanx so much, my friend, for taking the time to 'back read' and for those lovely stars!! ;) Here's wishing you an awesome, starry week ahead! ;) Yvette
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I am with you about a good romance.
Rikki
Comment from w.j.debi
What an intense beginning to the story. Fairies, werewolves and forbidden love. These are star crossed lovers for certain, and you describe their attraction to each other so very well. It seems they both live in the human world, but only on the edge of it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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What an intense beginning to the story. Fairies, werewolves and forbidden love. These are star crossed lovers for certain, and you describe their attraction to each other so very well. It seems they both live in the human world, but only on the edge of it.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh my goodness, W.J. -- I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you've jumped on board with me!! ;) I do love a good romance and what better than a wolf and a fairy, yeah?!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx so much, my lady, for taking the time and for those lovely stars!! ;) Here's wishing you an awesome, starry week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Tootie
Awesome first chapter! You capture the readers attention right from the beginning, hold their attention, and end the chapter in a perfect way. We really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more. Well done! Enchanting! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
(Commando & Tootie)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Awesome first chapter! You capture the readers attention right from the beginning, hold their attention, and end the chapter in a perfect way. We really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more. Well done! Enchanting! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
(Commando & Tootie)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh my goodness, you two -- I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you've jumped on board with me!! ;) I do love a good romance and what better than a wolf and a fairy for this fantasy girl, yeah?!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx so much, both of you, for taking the time to read!! ;) Here's wishing the two of you an awesome ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Your 'turn of phrase' is quite remarkable -- example: "It made my skin hum..."
I love the description of her smile!
Awwwwww! (turtle). Now another awwwww... (butterfly lands on her leg... *grin*)
Exceptional introduction to what the protagonist actually is, Yvette.
AWWWWWWWW! I am shivering with delight as they meet... SIX STARS IF I ONLY HAD ANY LEFT!!!************************************!!!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Your 'turn of phrase' is quite remarkable -- example: "It made my skin hum..."
I love the description of her smile!
Awwwwww! (turtle). Now another awwwww... (butterfly lands on her leg... *grin*)
Exceptional introduction to what the protagonist actually is, Yvette.
AWWWWWWWW! I am shivering with delight as they meet... SIX STARS IF I ONLY HAD ANY LEFT!!!************************************!!!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you've jumped on board with me, Dawn!! ;) I do love a good romance and what better than a wolf and a fairy, yeah?!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx so much for taking the time to start in!! ;) Here's wishing you an awesome, starry week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Thank you, YM, for prompting me to return to read the beginning of your well-crafted story. I enjoyed it Your use of descriptive wording sets the tome for enjoyment for readers. They become mesmerized by the story and feel a part of it. Your characters are well-defined. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you, YM, for prompting me to return to read the beginning of your well-crafted story. I enjoyed it Your use of descriptive wording sets the tome for enjoyment for readers. They become mesmerized by the story and feel a part of it. Your characters are well-defined. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hooray!! ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you've jumped on board with me!! ;) I do love a good romance and what better than a wolf and a fairy, yeah?!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx so much, my lady, for taking the time!! ;) Here's wishing you an awesome week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from May 1
Wow, I love the description of him in the first paragraph. Aww... all the descriptions are so beautiful. It's so interesting to read about them trying to fit in. I wonder what caused the grounding. Haha, I love her reaction to hearing his voice. I love how subtly you add more and more information, it's quite addictive for me. Oh, my, I am guessing the glowing has a deeper meaning. I wonder if it's true love or something like that. I look forward to learning more.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Wow, I love the description of him in the first paragraph. Aww... all the descriptions are so beautiful. It's so interesting to read about them trying to fit in. I wonder what caused the grounding. Haha, I love her reaction to hearing his voice. I love how subtly you add more and more information, it's quite addictive for me. Oh, my, I am guessing the glowing has a deeper meaning. I wonder if it's true love or something like that. I look forward to learning more.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh my goodness, May -- I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you've jumped on board with me!! ;) I do love a good romance and what better than a wolf and a fairy, yeah?!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx so much, my lady, for taking the time and for those lovely stars!! ;) Here's wishing you an awesome, starry week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janetsue
Oh my...I am hooked. As a true romantic, I fell for this completely. I can't wait to read the other two chapters.
"Do you all glow like this?" His voice was so deep that it vibrated the air around us, and it seemed filled with an almost child-like wonder.....Sigh. This just oozes the promise of a multitude of forthcoming entrancing delights. (Can you tell that I like your story?) lol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Oh my...I am hooked. As a true romantic, I fell for this completely. I can't wait to read the other two chapters.
"Do you all glow like this?" His voice was so deep that it vibrated the air around us, and it seemed filled with an almost child-like wonder.....Sigh. This just oozes the promise of a multitude of forthcoming entrancing delights. (Can you tell that I like your story?) lol
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Hooray!! I have you hooked!! ;) :)Thank you so very much for those wonderful stars and you have no idea how excited I am that you enjoy this.... fantasy isn't 'big' here so, I've noticed 'fantasy romance' might be even less so, but the crazy blonde shall persevere! ;) :) Thanx for taking the time to catch up, Janet, and I hope you enjoy the story!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
Wow! this is a very well written story (chapter) The attraction of opposites, I like the way you described the similarities of the clan and a motorcycle club, and some added humor along the way, but the feelings are real and are passed on to the reader with power that puts us there in the moment (time) very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Wow! this is a very well written story (chapter) The attraction of opposites, I like the way you described the similarities of the clan and a motorcycle club, and some added humor along the way, but the feelings are real and are passed on to the reader with power that puts us there in the moment (time) very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Oh, kahpot, I'm so very glad that you enjoyed this first chapter!! ;) ;) It's been fun 'playing' with the plot in my brain and it's gonna be great!! ;) ;) Yvette
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yes I read them back to back, totally absorbing
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I laughed so hard at this passage:
But, of course, I can't be some normal fairy and jump just a bit. No, I have to go all out and slip into the pond amidst the tall reeds, my butt thoroughly encased in gooey mud.
OMG, just the visual alone was stunning, but then I am now engrossed in another saga and world that you have created. One that I will bug you for more and more - and so will others! This was fantastic. I love the ideas of two characters from two different worlds coming together.
I think this is a beautiful contest entry MRW, CQ, and Beautiful Teacher - I think it is a very strong entry and I think the ideas you present here are clear and concise to a first chapter. I am not sure how long ago this was, so I am not sure if the contest ended, but hopefully, you do very well in it. It is a masterful story that I am going to be following from this point forward just like Maggies which I have to see what chapters if any I've missed.
You rock - I love Wolves - and I love Fairies - so you have hit a sweet spot here for me for sure! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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I laughed so hard at this passage:
But, of course, I can't be some normal fairy and jump just a bit. No, I have to go all out and slip into the pond amidst the tall reeds, my butt thoroughly encased in gooey mud.
OMG, just the visual alone was stunning, but then I am now engrossed in another saga and world that you have created. One that I will bug you for more and more - and so will others! This was fantastic. I love the ideas of two characters from two different worlds coming together.
I think this is a beautiful contest entry MRW, CQ, and Beautiful Teacher - I think it is a very strong entry and I think the ideas you present here are clear and concise to a first chapter. I am not sure how long ago this was, so I am not sure if the contest ended, but hopefully, you do very well in it. It is a masterful story that I am going to be following from this point forward just like Maggies which I have to see what chapters if any I've missed.
You rock - I love Wolves - and I love Fairies - so you have hit a sweet spot here for me for sure! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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I'm sorry I'm behind these days -- the placement for new students and talking with parents about enrollment has begun...yay! NOT. :) I am so very glad you liked this one...was another case of my imagination off the rails, I suppose, but, as they say, I'm roped into it now!! ;) :) And, yeah, the contest was last month....was a winner take all and there just aren't enough fantasy fans on here...(came in second or third, I seem to recall) :) ;) So glad that I now have you 'hooked' as I just released another chapter this past week. :) ;) Thanx for those lovely stars, Beautiful Lady, and you have a wonderful week of catching up and finding your 'normal' again! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Stephen Force
Ms. Roger you are truly an excellent writer. I don't think I have another six to give but this is definitely of the quality I have come to expect of you ma'am. You weave a nice tale, "I caught my breath as realization dawned. This was so much worse than I could have ever imagined..." Was not only an well set hook; but a bit of a cliff hanger:-) Well done!
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Ms. Roger you are truly an excellent writer. I don't think I have another six to give but this is definitely of the quality I have come to expect of you ma'am. You weave a nice tale, "I caught my breath as realization dawned. This was so much worse than I could have ever imagined..." Was not only an well set hook; but a bit of a cliff hanger:-) Well done!
Steve
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Okay, Steve -- you are a sweet talker!! :) ;) I do enjoy writing... just that there aren't a lot of fantasy fans out there so, stuff just doesn't get reviewed/read.... not that it'll stop my crazy blonde brain, but it's just REALLY good to hear that you enjoy! :) ;) Take care on your travels, sir, and be safe! ;) Yvette
