Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

There is something calming about the nightlights that I think we often forget about. You did a great job and it's a good reminder for all of us to go out and enjoy them

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019

Thanks. There's nothing like stargazing on a warm summer night.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This lune poem, Nightlights, has the proper formatting and suggests that a haze of the cosmos can change what is flickering light into a message of peace from the universe. Nice.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019

Thanks. Perhaps the message is simply to enjoy their beauty.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Your poem is a lovely reminder that even in the darkest night, when we can feel bleak and alone, soft starlight can be a comfort and make us feel that everything will be ok. I like your simple poem of reassurance.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love it
I love the artwork you choose t go with your poem
It is a perfect match
Oh how I can relate to our every words
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Thank you for sharing
cookie

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019

Thanks. I think everyone loves the stars.

reply by misscookie on 11-Jun-2019

Your very welcome, have a nice day.
Cookie

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

This is a very well penned entry for the upcoming Lune Poetry Contest, Cindy.
A Lune, while displaying very few words, must convey vivid imagery and a clear, concise message.


'Neath a bulbous moon,
lovers swoon--
daylight's coming soon.

Yours most certainly fits the bill.
Best wishes to you in the final judging.
~Dean

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Cindy! I think I'm going to opt for the bright starlight... that means you aren't near any artificial light, towns, cities, that type of thing... to dim the stars with all that unnatural light brightening up the sky. :) Nice poem, nice feeling. :)

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks. I have to admit the stars look nicer away from the city.

Comment from diamondbogle

Excellent

I do so love the stars. I always wanted to study astronomy but then math got in the way but I love this poem. Its true the stars have always made me feel like I was safe.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks. I think everyone loves the night sky.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

So true. This is a lovely Lune poem for the contest. There's nothing like a starry night with the moon residing that can make you feel safe. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks. I think everyone loves a clear summer night.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

You are so right, a clear starlit night has such a soothing effect that you do feel everything is right with the world. If only it could be that easy. This is an excellent Lune poem and a well-written contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks. I think everyone loves a clear summer night.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Starlight, in its way, is like sunlight by day, it lifts the spirits when cloud and fog are gone. I do not know the details of lune construction, but this looks fine to me.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks. What would we do without the stars at night?