Nightlights
the sky at night58 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Cindy: I really like this piece of work. The graphic is really cool and I like the composition of your poem. It's very calming and mellow. You wrote a very nice piece. I read it half a dozen times and what popped into my mind was a song from 1976. There was a band called Starbuck and they had a song called "Moonlight, Feels Right." If you are interested you can probably find this song on YouTube.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Hello Cindy: I really like this piece of work. The graphic is really cool and I like the composition of your poem. It's very calming and mellow. You wrote a very nice piece. I read it half a dozen times and what popped into my mind was a song from 1976. There was a band called Starbuck and they had a song called "Moonlight, Feels Right." If you are interested you can probably find this song on YouTube.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. I remember that song. I haven't heard it in years. Yeah, I think it would go nicely with this piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful lune offering with the added melody of rhyme to add to its appeal... Great that you take our words from the sky to the surface and its feelings! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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A beautiful lune offering with the added melody of rhyme to add to its appeal... Great that you take our words from the sky to the surface and its feelings! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed my little poem.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, indeed the weather or a clear night or sunshine on the face makes an enormous difference to our mood, tending to make us positive, or, in the case of poor weather. Less so. Well done an excellent entry in this Lune poetry contest Cindy, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Oh yes, indeed the weather or a clear night or sunshine on the face makes an enormous difference to our mood, tending to make us positive, or, in the case of poor weather. Less so. Well done an excellent entry in this Lune poetry contest Cindy, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. Believe it or not, much of Alberta got snow today. It certainly affected our moods.
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO CINDY: I like your posting here in that it is brief, clear, and to the point. With only three lines and eleven words you tell a complete long story about our night sky lights. I like that. That's witty. Well done, Cindy. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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HELLO CINDY: I like your posting here in that it is brief, clear, and to the point. With only three lines and eleven words you tell a complete long story about our night sky lights. I like that. That's witty. Well done, Cindy. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. That second line was a bit of a challenge. It was hard to whittle it down to three syllables.
Comment from Deniz22
Now Cindy, you wrote three measly lines (speaking of quantity, not quality) and I have to write six or you won't get no review. Gotta give me more to work with! How about I do a chant; Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer, just to fill up the requirements of FS. You are good and your work is great...I just need more of it! :)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Now Cindy, you wrote three measly lines (speaking of quantity, not quality) and I have to write six or you won't get no review. Gotta give me more to work with! How about I do a chant; Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer,Cindy am great writer, just to fill up the requirements of FS. You are good and your work is great...I just need more of it! :)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. Haha, I have the same problem reviewing the short poems. It's hard to write a review that's longer than the poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words plus picture compliment each other nicely, Cindy. Good job with the prompt. Your syllable are correct per line with the added bonus of rhyme. Your message is soothing, too. I wonder what this would look like aligned left--like a crescent moon. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Your words plus picture compliment each other nicely, Cindy. Good job with the prompt. Your syllable are correct per line with the added bonus of rhyme. Your message is soothing, too. I wonder what this would look like aligned left--like a crescent moon. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. I think it might look really cool aligned like a moon, but I have no idea how to do it.
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On the 'edit' page (where you first added your work) go to 'use advanced editor--near the bottom of your poem. Select that, then highlight your poem and choose the icon that looks like a page with print lined up on the left. Then SAVE!!!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how the sky is at night, you find in the darkest night, soft starlight makes the world feel right; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks how the sky is at night, you find in the darkest night, soft starlight makes the world feel right; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. There's nothing like stars to cheer us up on a dark night.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It does seem peaceful and calm looking up to the heavens on those dark starry nights. Some nights it just seems that their is just an innumerable host of them. Then, you have the clear as a bell night when you can't spot one anywhere. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done Cindy!
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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It does seem peaceful and calm looking up to the heavens on those dark starry nights. Some nights it just seems that their is just an innumerable host of them. Then, you have the clear as a bell night when you can't spot one anywhere. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done Cindy!
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks. I'm so glad you liked my little poem.
