Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

A very attractive lune poem. Beautiful description of starlight with its implicit contrast to the sun's glare, and its hint of romance.

At another level it's a poem of hope.

The rhyme gives the write an upbeat, positive vibe.

Good luck in the contest.

Blessings, Julia

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked my little poem.

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

Mmmm, your poem reminds me of my time spent working in the Arava desert in Israel back in my 20's. The skies were stunning and peaceful and they did indeed make the world feel right. Very nice, great Lune for the contest, good luck!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks. There does seem to be magic in the night sky.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Excellent lune, Cindy. And you've jazzed it up that much more by introducing the rhyme which serve to raise the sentiment that much more.

Excellent work and best wishes to you with the Contest Committee.

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks for the lovely review and the good wishes for the contest.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this delightful poem.
The rhyming enhances the overall effect. There IS something almost magical about starlight and moonlight.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks. Yes, the sky at night does have a way of cheering us up.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Your poem may be little, but the words are very comforting. Just sit out in the evening and watch the switch between daylight and night, thinking about things going on in your life. The soothing part is how something that is bothering you during the day doesn't seem as stressful at the moment and you can slowly process the problem here in this resting place

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks. Yes, there's something about the sky at night that puts things in perspective.

reply by Patty Palmer on 07-Jun-2019

you're welcome!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and very lovely imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks for the lovely review and the good wishes in the contest.

Comment from Willie P. Smith

Excellent

I really like this three liner. You not only give a good picture of starlight, but your rhyme is right on. I dare anyone to find fault. You would receive six stars from me but I have used them all. Real nice work.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks. I'll take the virtual six. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

A powerful statement made in a few short lines. When things look the darkest, we just need to look up. The softness of the starlight can soothe our troubled souls. And give us hope to hold onto. Lovely sentiments expressed in this lune.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed my little poem.

Comment from Blue Hendrix

Excellent

Words so simple but absolutely true nice poem and beautiful picture that further brings your point across. Thanks for sharing! I found no errors and enjoyed this lovely poem.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Nightlight's" is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019

Thanks

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 08-Jun-2019

You're welcome.