Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Cindy,

For the stars light the darkness overhead and remind us that we are not alone. I too enjoy the stars and also marvel at their glow. Once in Chile away from most lights the stars were magnificent and so bright. Good write.

Cheers,

Winslow

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. Yes, the stars are amazing once you get out of the city.

Comment from Ja Majal

Exceptional

Oh how the stars make us reflect and stare off into the distance. As if we should be up there with them shining, but alas we cannot, and so we must reflect inwardly the same.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks for the six! I think we all love looking at the stars.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for focusing on the impact of "starlight" and adding a parallel artwork to intensity your point. Best wishes in the Lune Contest and continue to feel "right"- Joan

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image
and presentation, Cindy.
-The syllable count is good,
and the rhyme, imagery, and
alliteration are effective.
-In addition, you have
effectively used one
continuous thought.
-You have a good poem
with a positive message.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. I wanted this one to be happy and positive.

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Jun-2019

You are welcome. I am glad it was.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the lights in the night sky that makes the world seems just right with soft light to still find the way we like to gorder.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. I think everyone loves the night sky, especially in the summertime.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I find this poem awesome and well written. It makes me see the starlight at night. Beautiful poem. Well written. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks for the wonderful review and the good wishes for the contest.

reply by Raul1 on 08-Jun-2019

You're welcome.

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

Don't you love the magnificent sky of stars - out away from the city - often when we go camping on the far side of the lake, the nights are glorious. There's hardly an inch of sky that's not covered with those gleaming orbs.
Good poem

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. Yes, the sky is beautiful at night, especially when you get away from the city.

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Beautiful poem, Cindy. In only a few words, you have created a beautiful sight that you can clearly see in your own mind. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. Yes, the night sky is beautiful.

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Yes it does, finding your conveyance very precise in clarity refreshing in given abilities to grip the reader, wonderfully expressed in my opinion of this particular write.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. That second line was a bit of a challenge. It was hard to get it down to three syllables. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

These little poems are sometimes lacking somehow, but I like yours. The rhyme makes it special.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019

Thanks. The short ones can be a challenge. You have to make the most of each syllable.