The Roaring Train
nove otto four words contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I prefer rhyming poetry, but your entry covers all the bases of the writing prompt. Plus it is excellently written. You have painted an excellent picture of a very rainy train ride. Very good work.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I prefer rhyming poetry, but your entry covers all the bases of the writing prompt. Plus it is excellently written. You have painted an excellent picture of a very rainy train ride. Very good work.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Dear Willie, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from RodG
I live very close to the train tracks, but I have not seen a STEAM engine in years. Your poem brings back memories of such engines and CABOOSES too. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I live very close to the train tracks, but I have not seen a STEAM engine in years. Your poem brings back memories of such engines and CABOOSES too. Rod
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Dear Rod, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have it all in this write, I heard the steam train thundering into the station, felt the steam hissing, the clanging bell, I so enjoyed your description and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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You have it all in this write, I heard the steam train thundering into the station, felt the steam hissing, the clanging bell, I so enjoyed your description and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Mystery Poet
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have used the words appropriately, you remember those memorable days, state and status of the train and feeling about the train and rain; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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You have used the words appropriately, you remember those memorable days, state and status of the train and feeling about the train and rain; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Dear Dr Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from James W. Reynolds
I like how this poem celebrates the romanticism of trains and rail travel. The final line is compelling. I like how the clanging bell morphs into a song. Nice work.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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I like how this poem celebrates the romanticism of trains and rail travel. The final line is compelling. I like how the clanging bell morphs into a song. Nice work.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Dear James, Thank you for your comments and review.
