A Crime of Passion
Jealousy causes a lot of strife!3 total reviews
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello, jealousy is indeed a bringer of trouble, and I have been the victim of it on numerous occasions, but both the people in the poem seem equally evil, so I was unsure of who was who, and what the poem's intentions were in this case. It is unclear and leaves no resolution. I think your publishing choices were a little off also, because what has the lady of GOT got to do with jealousy? So, I would look for a picture that was more appropriate to highlight this work on jealousy. Eve.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Hello, jealousy is indeed a bringer of trouble, and I have been the victim of it on numerous occasions, but both the people in the poem seem equally evil, so I was unsure of who was who, and what the poem's intentions were in this case. It is unclear and leaves no resolution. I think your publishing choices were a little off also, because what has the lady of GOT got to do with jealousy? So, I would look for a picture that was more appropriate to highlight this work on jealousy. Eve.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Sorry you found this to be "unclear" and with "no resolution". Sorry also for my apparent bad taste in presentation.
I am a bit perplexed as to how the "intention" of this was unclear. As for the pic of the female demon: did you actually READ this poem properly?
I believe your intention was to simply criticise, and I don't appreciate that at all.
Thanks for stopping by NOT.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a very scary poem about the murder of a cheating husband out of jealousy. Maybe if she left after the first of what seems to be many affairs,
she wouldn't have resorted to killing in a jealous rage and ending up ending both their lives.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is a very scary poem about the murder of a cheating husband out of jealousy. Maybe if she left after the first of what seems to be many affairs,
she wouldn't have resorted to killing in a jealous rage and ending up ending both their lives.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much Dragon, I'm glad you enjoyed this!
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from way2gokevs
This is a an exceptional poem you have penned my friend.......
Such lively words, meaningful and enlightening......
Pleasure to read, thanks for sharing. Cheers, Kev.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is a an exceptional poem you have penned my friend.......
Such lively words, meaningful and enlightening......
Pleasure to read, thanks for sharing. Cheers, Kev.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanks once again Kev's, I'm thrilled at your comments and the six stars!
