Transthformathion
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Comment from Bichon
Haha, a great entry into the contest. It sounds like the writer is in desperate need of teeth, that's for sure! A nice lighthearted poem. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Haha, a great entry into the contest. It sounds like the writer is in desperate need of teeth, that's for sure! A nice lighthearted poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanksth, Bichon!
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I so wish I had a six left to give. This is an art in itself that you can write poetry and make it sound exactly like you have no teeth. LOVE IT. Very creatively done. Good luck with this one. You totally deserve to win!
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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I so wish I had a six left to give. This is an art in itself that you can write poetry and make it sound exactly like you have no teeth. LOVE IT. Very creatively done. Good luck with this one. You totally deserve to win!
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho muth, Wendy!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Very entertaining take on the contest. I like how you show us in the transformed speech how much our words would be mangled without teeth!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Lol. Very entertaining take on the contest. I like how you show us in the transformed speech how much our words would be mangled without teeth!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanksth for thith review, Iyenochka.
Comment from Michele Harber
You thertainly pothted a very funny contetht entwy, my FSthBFF. I'm in thisth contetht ath well, tho I'm hoping thith could be interethting. Of courth, you could jutht chew up the competition. Good luck, and may the betht falth teeth win!
My one thujethtion ith that you looth the "Whee!" at the end. Itsth unnethethary and cauthes a pauth after "me" that dithrupth the flow.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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You thertainly pothted a very funny contetht entwy, my FSthBFF. I'm in thisth contetht ath well, tho I'm hoping thith could be interethting. Of courth, you could jutht chew up the competition. Good luck, and may the betht falth teeth win!
My one thujethtion ith that you looth the "Whee!" at the end. Itsth unnethethary and cauthes a pauth after "me" that dithrupth the flow.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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It wuth a lastht thecond impulsth, tho maybe my insthincths were a little off. I'll re-read and give it thome more conthiderathion. Thankths.
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You're welcome, but hath anyone ever told you you have a thpeetch impediment?
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Thatsth prepothsterousth!
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Can you pleathe aim that in a different direction? You're thpitting all over me!
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Buy a freaking parathol!
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Well thankth a lot! I thought we were friendth.
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I'm thorry. Pleasthe forgive my outburstht.
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Thath OK. Everybody makth mithtakes.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent. Your cartoonist words are great. Good rhyme and very understandable desire for false teeth. He/she better get them quick, or nobody will be able to understand. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Excellent. Your cartoonist words are great. Good rhyme and very understandable desire for false teeth. He/she better get them quick, or nobody will be able to understand. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Hahaha!! Yes, definitely true, Willie. Thanks for the fun review.
Comment from estory
I think you captured the lisp in the voice of the person without teeth very well. Nice job with that, and also working it into a rhyme scheme, with meter and everything. Funny, witty, gets a good chuckle from me. estory
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I think you captured the lisp in the voice of the person without teeth very well. Nice job with that, and also working it into a rhyme scheme, with meter and everything. Funny, witty, gets a good chuckle from me. estory
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanksth, esthory!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is cute and kinda funny. I've heard people talking that have false teeth when they aren't wearing them. They sound just like this. You've got it down pat in this one! Thanks for sharing this humorous and well thought out work. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is cute and kinda funny. I've heard people talking that have false teeth when they aren't wearing them. They sound just like this. You've got it down pat in this one! Thanks for sharing this humorous and well thought out work. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I just want it on the record, though, that the reason is NOT because I have no teeth! Honestht!
Thanks for the terrific review, Jeffrey.
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That's funny! Thanks for sharing that.
Comment from victor 66
A pretty funny poem that rhymes well and has good rhythm. But I will have to work on being able to decipher lisp speech. A gunnery sergeant once told me two things I should take care of; one is my feet and the other is my teeth. What he meant was, if I can't out run the enemy,I might have to use my teeth to fight him. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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A pretty funny poem that rhymes well and has good rhythm. But I will have to work on being able to decipher lisp speech. A gunnery sergeant once told me two things I should take care of; one is my feet and the other is my teeth. What he meant was, if I can't out run the enemy,I might have to use my teeth to fight him. Best wishes.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Wow! Let's hope this guy in the poem is extremely fast then!
Thanks for the very informative (and amusing) review!
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You are most welcome. It was a fun read.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh dear, sounds like an urgent need to me. I don't have any false teeth yet, hoping not to. This is funny and clever, I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Oh dear, sounds like an urgent need to me. I don't have any false teeth yet, hoping not to. This is funny and clever, I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thankths, Roxth!
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Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: I like your posting here in that is extremely clever and it is unique. This is well done. It Is interesting and it is humorous. This is good all around. Thank you for sharing. God bless you, poet. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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HELLO POET: I like your posting here in that is extremely clever and it is unique. This is well done. It Is interesting and it is humorous. This is good all around. Thank you for sharing. God bless you, poet. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I apprethiate thith, Rhonnie.
