Transthformathion
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Comment from Heather Knight
This is hilarious! I love the way you've turned all the s's into th's.
Teeth are really important. I wore braces as a grown up...
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in this peculiar contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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This is hilarious! I love the way you've turned all the s's into th's.
Teeth are really important. I wore braces as a grown up...
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in this peculiar contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Hahaha. It IS a peculiar contest, but it's also been pretty fun to read the entries. People on here on VERY creative!
Thanks for the fun review, Maria.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very funny. My wife lost a front tooth and sounded just like this. I wrote a story about it. Your poem is a great contest entry. I'm predicting a winner.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Very funny. My wife lost a front tooth and sounded just like this. I wrote a story about it. Your poem is a great contest entry. I'm predicting a winner.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Awww, Thomasth; thanksth tho much for thith lovely review and the well-withesth!
Comment from royowen
What a great entry in this false teeth poetry contest. An excellently scribed,very amusing narrstive,written so one could swear one was talkingbasvthough they had no teeth, wait a minute, it is! Well written whyming couplets, well done, good luck,blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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What a great entry in this false teeth poetry contest. An excellently scribed,very amusing narrstive,written so one could swear one was talkingbasvthough they had no teeth, wait a minute, it is! Well written whyming couplets, well done, good luck,blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho muth for thith nithe review!!
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Comment from Mark Valentine
You've written a very pithy poem.
Seriously, I love the humor and the word selection - especially the last stanza. Great take on the kind of unusual contest theme - I'm sure it will do well.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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You've written a very pithy poem.
Seriously, I love the humor and the word selection - especially the last stanza. Great take on the kind of unusual contest theme - I'm sure it will do well.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho theriousthly much, Mark. I think you are pithy, too.
Comment from rama devi
Hilariouth fun! I especially enjoyed the alliterative: thexthy, thultry, thuccesthful me
Ha ha ha. I could hear your character's voice in my head.
Fun POV. Fun rhymes. Fun flow. Fun presentaiton. A sure contender in this contest.
The title is witty too.
Hee hee,
rd
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Hilariouth fun! I especially enjoyed the alliterative: thexthy, thultry, thuccesthful me
Ha ha ha. I could hear your character's voice in my head.
Fun POV. Fun rhymes. Fun flow. Fun presentaiton. A sure contender in this contest.
The title is witty too.
Hee hee,
rd
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho very muth, Rama. You are a thweetie to thay thith.
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Hee hee~ You're a Thweetie too!
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Comment from Sylvia Page
hello writer,
Come on, put on your new false theeth and smile at the girlsh who knows one will win your heart! Maybe she will produce a dish you cannot resist.
Best wishes in the contest
Sylvia
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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hello writer,
Come on, put on your new false theeth and smile at the girlsh who knows one will win your heart! Maybe she will produce a dish you cannot resist.
Best wishes in the contest
Sylvia
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Hopefully not too cristhpy, though!!
Thanksth, Thylvia!
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Heh, heh!
Comment from Ava Wilson
This is absolutely fantastic! I loved hearing it read out loud and I couldn't help but sound like Daffy Duck. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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This is absolutely fantastic! I loved hearing it read out loud and I couldn't help but sound like Daffy Duck. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thankths, Ava!! Your wordsth made me feel all thmiley and fantasthtic! xo
Comment from papa55mike
Well, I guess teeth, make the man. This poem is very funny and well-written. The picture is terrific! I've read a few of these entries today, and I like this one.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Well, I guess teeth, make the man. This poem is very funny and well-written. The picture is terrific! I've read a few of these entries today, and I like this one.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanksth tho much, Papa55mike! I thintherely apprethiate thith review!
Comment from Hugh McDowell
This is very funny. My wife imitates the cartoon cat, Sylvester. Sounds exactly like you have written. I know it's a serious concern for those who have dental issues but we also need to laugh at some of the outcomes. Excellent. Hugh
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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This is very funny. My wife imitates the cartoon cat, Sylvester. Sounds exactly like you have written. I know it's a serious concern for those who have dental issues but we also need to laugh at some of the outcomes. Excellent. Hugh
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Life ith a theriesth of challengesth. We have to be able to laugh our way through them!! (That musth be a lot easthier to do when you have a wife who can talk like Thylversther!! You hit the jackpot with that one, Hugh!)
Comment from barkingdog
OK, sexy, sultry, successful you!
Whee! I really enjoyed this clever entry.
The rhyme is perfect in each amusing couplet.
I'm still smiling.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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OK, sexy, sultry, successful you!
Whee! I really enjoyed this clever entry.
The rhyme is perfect in each amusing couplet.
I'm still smiling.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanksth, Barkingdog! I tho apprethiate thith review!
