Determined To Make It
50 word story contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from BlueTiger
Great job, I really liked this. Short stories can be hard to write, but you managed to make a tight, funny piece here. Nothing I can see that needs changing. Best of luck on the contest!
-BT
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Great job, I really liked this. Short stories can be hard to write, but you managed to make a tight, funny piece here. Nothing I can see that needs changing. Best of luck on the contest!
-BT
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, BT. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is to funny. I didn't anticipate the ending. What a humorous surprise. I was expecting something else, anything else. I can understand this though. Sometimes it gets tight trying to meet the deadline. I enjoyed this and it made me smile. Great job and well done!
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is to funny. I didn't anticipate the ending. What a humorous surprise. I was expecting something else, anything else. I can understand this though. Sometimes it gets tight trying to meet the deadline. I enjoyed this and it made me smile. Great job and well done!
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jeffrey. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Teri7
This is a really cute 50 word story you have penned for the writing prompt. I am relieved to read that no old ladies were harmed from this. lol Very good job my friend! Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This is a really cute 50 word story you have penned for the writing prompt. I am relieved to read that no old ladies were harmed from this. lol Very good job my friend! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Teri. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
