Torn by Jealousy
contest entry poem about jealousy3 total reviews
Comment from LeannaP
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Especially the line, "Jealousy is a criminal sin." I feel like this carries such depth, and understanding. Great job and much luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. Especially the line, "Jealousy is a criminal sin." I feel like this carries such depth, and understanding. Great job and much luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Dear LeannaP, Thank you for your comments and review.
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Your welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about jealousy. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery that looked like a wooden tree snake to me. Very good job! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is a very well written poem about jealousy. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery that looked like a wooden tree snake to me. Very good job! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your words are spot on about jealousy, how it makes people feel, the causes of it and how damning it is to us. I have seen the outcome of a jealous act and it can be devastating to people, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Your words are spot on about jealousy, how it makes people feel, the causes of it and how damning it is to us. I have seen the outcome of a jealous act and it can be devastating to people, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review.
