Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A clever write here, few words with a big impact, I enjoyed your view of jealousy because you are so right, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks for reading and for encouraging comments ..zanya

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

A most creative short poem that describes the instant and unnerving emotional impact of jealousy.

Jealousy's prism is an excellent image. Suggest flares as an alternative to glows. But that's just my take.

Best of luck in the contest.

Blessings, Julia

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Superb review - thanks for reading zanya

reply by juliaSjames on 09-Jun-2019

You're welcome!

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

You've said a mouthful in just a few words. Of course, jealousy is one of those subjects you/we could talk on for hours, I think! This was nice. Good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Great review zanya

Comment from James W. Reynolds

Excellent

I like the use of green in the title, but not in the body of the poem itself. It helps set the tone without dominating it. The final line is also strong.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019

Thanks for reading and superb review zanya