Fifty Shades of Jealousy
So much more than merely green61 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
A brilliant description of jealousy, your words and great artwork have brought this wonderful poem together, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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A brilliant description of jealousy, your words and great artwork have brought this wonderful poem together, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Wow!! I'm feeling all KINDS of delighted reading this review. Thank you, Kahpot, for all your wonderful comments. I couldn't appreciate them more.
Comment from shaffer40
This is an interesting use of colors to describe jealousy and its various consequences. I especially like the line: "stoked by mind games,
then scalded by ever-fervent claims and blames." Intriguing creativity.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is an interesting use of colors to describe jealousy and its various consequences. I especially like the line: "stoked by mind games,
then scalded by ever-fervent claims and blames." Intriguing creativity.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanks very, very much for this terrific review, Shaffer. I couldn't appreciate it more.
Comment from William Ross
Nery nice, jealousy the green eyed monster I've heard it referred as. I like the rhyming pattern and the flow of this, and you nailed the word as well feelings and meaning. good luck and have a great day
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Nery nice, jealousy the green eyed monster I've heard it referred as. I like the rhyming pattern and the flow of this, and you nailed the word as well feelings and meaning. good luck and have a great day
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you, William!! What a really nice review this is! So encouraging. I appreciate it.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is very nice. It walks you through the feelings and emotions that are often associated with jealousy. I could feel a change happening as I walked through the words.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is very nice. It walks you through the feelings and emotions that are often associated with jealousy. I could feel a change happening as I walked through the words.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Mia, for picking up on the increased intensity and furor. Thanks, too, for your well-wishes in the contest. I appreciate it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
You have expertly blended color with your poem about jealousy. How very clever. You started by reminded us of the classic color of jealousy, which is green, and then used symbolism to take the idea to relationships and other color associations, like blue being sadness.
Great job, and good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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You have expertly blended color with your poem about jealousy. How very clever. You started by reminded us of the classic color of jealousy, which is green, and then used symbolism to take the idea to relationships and other color associations, like blue being sadness.
Great job, and good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I like this review a lot, Rhonda; you totally got every bit of symbolism I put into this poem.
Thanks for your well-wishes in the contest. I do appreciate that.
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Great!
Comment from Joy Graham
Dear Mystery Poet,
I never thought about colors for jealousy before. I think you are onto something and I agree with you. There are many shades of jealousy. I hav not heard of miasmic blue before. It sounds exotic. I will look it up.
Best wishes in this contest. You have a fine entry here.
Sincerely Joy xx
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
I never thought about colors for jealousy before. I think you are onto something and I agree with you. There are many shades of jealousy. I hav not heard of miasmic blue before. It sounds exotic. I will look it up.
Best wishes in this contest. You have a fine entry here.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much, Joy. I appreciate this review.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Wow. It sure sounds like you know this subject rather well. Yikes! Unfortunately, some of us have seen the devastating effects of jealousy up close and personal. I hope you weren't the one hurt by it. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Wow. It sure sounds like you know this subject rather well. Yikes! Unfortunately, some of us have seen the devastating effects of jealousy up close and personal. I hope you weren't the one hurt by it. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I have been, but I'm smarter as a result. So, I consider that a triumph. Thank you for the kind and caring review.
Comment from tfawcus
Miasmic blue - sounds like a painful contusion. Jealousy has a way of morphing into violence. I found this an original and thought provoking poem. Well written.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Miasmic blue - sounds like a painful contusion. Jealousy has a way of morphing into violence. I found this an original and thought provoking poem. Well written.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I appreciate your feedback very much, tfawcus. Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Poem well written. Rhyme and rhythm very good as well,
You described jealousy very well. I believe jealousy can take on many colors and all at the same time!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Poem well written. Rhyme and rhythm very good as well,
You described jealousy very well. I believe jealousy can take on many colors and all at the same time!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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You know I agree!! Thanks for the helpful review, Patricia.
Comment from Gloria ....
I have always thought it quite unfair to use my favourite colour green for jealousy, but alas and alack that is how it has been portrayed. This is a wonderful entry into this contest and you have well delineated some of the bluer aspects of that green hue.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth with this gem. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I have always thought it quite unfair to use my favourite colour green for jealousy, but alas and alack that is how it has been portrayed. This is a wonderful entry into this contest and you have well delineated some of the bluer aspects of that green hue.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth with this gem. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this wise and very colorful review, Gloria.
