Children of the Meadow
Children's Heaven57 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Children's Heaven, brings all the qualities we assign to our childhood innocence and to fashion the perfect new reality for all those who come to heaven as children. Nice.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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This poem, Children's Heaven, brings all the qualities we assign to our childhood innocence and to fashion the perfect new reality for all those who come to heaven as children. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Bill. Linda
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. I think that sometimes we write something inspirational and powerful out of our own experiences or someone else's experiences. This sounds like something we that are His can enjoy along with the children. I enjoyed reading
this well written work. Well done Linda!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I like this. I think that sometimes we write something inspirational and powerful out of our own experiences or someone else's experiences. This sounds like something we that are His can enjoy along with the children. I enjoyed reading
this well written work. Well done Linda!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thanks so much, Jeffrey. Linda
Comment from Willie P. Smith
If I read this correctly, you are referring to the joys in heaven. Children who have passed playing in heaven. Very good, even if i am wrong in defining it.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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If I read this correctly, you are referring to the joys in heaven. Children who have passed playing in heaven. Very good, even if i am wrong in defining it.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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You got it right, Willie. No where else can a child be so innocent and free, as they should be because they are children! Thanks for reading. LInda
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Beautiful but sad. God has a special place for children and a very special place for those who abuse them. The death penalty is my solution. Everyday on the news another child is killed by a parent or boyfriend, makes me so mad!! This is so well done.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Beautiful but sad. God has a special place for children and a very special place for those who abuse them. The death penalty is my solution. Everyday on the news another child is killed by a parent or boyfriend, makes me so mad!! This is so well done.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Roxanna, even worse are the multitudes of children who suffered various abuses over many years and live the rest of their lives still suffering. Thanks for reading. Linda
Comment from Rachelle Allen
So beautiful, Linda. What lovely solace for our minds. I have one little teeny nit that I almost wasn't going to mention but then decided should so that your work is flawless: the words "theirs" is already possessive, so it doesn't need an apostrophe. xo
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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So beautiful, Linda. What lovely solace for our minds. I have one little teeny nit that I almost wasn't going to mention but then decided should so that your work is flawless: the words "theirs" is already possessive, so it doesn't need an apostrophe. xo
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Rachelle, for pointing out the mistake. I'll take care of it. And, thanks for reading. Linda
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a beautiful verse, Linda. The pure and honest joy you share is uplifting to the reader... I know it was to me. Thank you for sharing a vision of purity and innocence.
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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This is a beautiful verse, Linda. The pure and honest joy you share is uplifting to the reader... I know it was to me. Thank you for sharing a vision of purity and innocence.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much, Melissa. Linda
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO LIVELYLINDA: I love children. I love your children's poem here. Those flowers look like daffodils to me. I've imagined that each one of them is a child playing in the sun kissed green meadow. Thank you for posting this. This is a perk. God bless you, Linda. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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HELLO LIVELYLINDA: I love children. I love your children's poem here. Those flowers look like daffodils to me. I've imagined that each one of them is a child playing in the sun kissed green meadow. Thank you for posting this. This is a perk. God bless you, Linda. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you rhonnie. Linda
Comment from nomi338
Beautiful. My faith in God and his word the Bible, assures me that after he brings an end to the wicked worldly system currently in place and being controlled by Satan the devil, a world just like the one you so nicely described will be in place all over the world. I look forward to that and I pray for that world to come, even if I am not around to see it.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Beautiful. My faith in God and his word the Bible, assures me that after he brings an end to the wicked worldly system currently in place and being controlled by Satan the devil, a world just like the one you so nicely described will be in place all over the world. I look forward to that and I pray for that world to come, even if I am not around to see it.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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You will see it in Heaven, nomi338! Thanks for reading. Linda
Comment from victor 66
It's interesting that back in the mid-fifty's, although my parents drank quite heavily, children living in a small town, we pretty much came and went as we pleased. Our days were like much you discribe. I now refer to the children back then as "free range kids". Yeah, that would be heaven for children. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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It's interesting that back in the mid-fifty's, although my parents drank quite heavily, children living in a small town, we pretty much came and went as we pleased. Our days were like much you discribe. I now refer to the children back then as "free range kids". Yeah, that would be heaven for children. Best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading. Linda
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You are most welcome, Linda.
Comment from Cedar
Hello Linda: This is a beautiful poem, your words are so true. The presentation picture you chose really brings your words alive.
I've seen "The Shack" a couple of times also, it's a great movie to watch and to write about as you have. Have a nice day, my friend...Bill
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Hello Linda: This is a beautiful poem, your words are so true. The presentation picture you chose really brings your words alive.
I've seen "The Shack" a couple of times also, it's a great movie to watch and to write about as you have. Have a nice day, my friend...Bill
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Bill. LInda
