Children of the Meadow
Children's Heaven57 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The meadows offer freedom like no other place on earth. Children glory in the countryside because as you say, they are unencumbered. A joyful poem that applauds nature. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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The meadows offer freedom like no other place on earth. Children glory in the countryside because as you say, they are unencumbered. A joyful poem that applauds nature. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This poem is based on the book and movie, 'The Shack', and it is about what Heaven might actually be like. It isn't about nature, it is about a child's eternal happiness when they go to Heaven. Thanks for reading. You should see the movie, 'The Shack'. livelylinda
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Thank you for letting me know about the movie.
Comment from LIJ Red
An excellent free verse that made me recall the old hymn, "How Beautiful Heaven Must Be." Very well supported by magnificent artwork, it brings the prayers of mankind over the centuries into focus.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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An excellent free verse that made me recall the old hymn, "How Beautiful Heaven Must Be." Very well supported by magnificent artwork, it brings the prayers of mankind over the centuries into focus.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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LljRed: thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and lovely poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you used. It sounds like Heaven for little children! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This is a very beautiful and lovely poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you used. It sounds like Heaven for little children! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Teri, for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Beautifully written. The imagery you used was so vivid and painted a very cksar image. The words made it seem like the children were finally free.great job
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Beautifully written. The imagery you used was so vivid and painted a very cksar image. The words made it seem like the children were finally free.great job
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from estory
I think this came out really well. I loved the lighthearted, yet poignant, touches to the voice here, capturing the innocence of the children, but also casting a shadow over it with all the things that poisoned them; predators, abuse, fears around those corners. It's colorful and descriptive, and we really see those kids free and enjoying the world, kicking off their shoes and running around in the grass. A great vision of that heaven for children. Jesus said; "If you do not enter the kingdom of heaven as one of these children, you cannot enter it at all." estory
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I think this came out really well. I loved the lighthearted, yet poignant, touches to the voice here, capturing the innocence of the children, but also casting a shadow over it with all the things that poisoned them; predators, abuse, fears around those corners. It's colorful and descriptive, and we really see those kids free and enjoying the world, kicking off their shoes and running around in the grass. A great vision of that heaven for children. Jesus said; "If you do not enter the kingdom of heaven as one of these children, you cannot enter it at all." estory
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Everyone did not 'get this poem but you got the gist of it! Thank you. livelylinda
Comment from mvbrooks
Most of the time when you see "children in heaven" it's part of a story of a child who has died. In this case, the focus is on the place and it's described as a safe haven, unlike the hazardous real world.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Most of the time when you see "children in heaven" it's part of a story of a child who has died. In this case, the focus is on the place and it's described as a safe haven, unlike the hazardous real world.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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mybrooks: awwwww, no, this was about what a child's Heaven may actually be like where they are safe and can just be free, happy children with God watching over them. Thanks for reading. livelylinda
Comment from A. Willow Bends
No sixes left. I am sorry. I also have read the book. It is a great source of inspiration, I agree. The overall effect of this is stunning. The picture is quite an asset to your beautiful poem. The poetry is exceptional in every respect, from word and topic choice to format to the love it is written with and the hope it gives others. This is a superior piece of work, one of the best I've ever read on this site and just know I would shower you with stars if I could.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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No sixes left. I am sorry. I also have read the book. It is a great source of inspiration, I agree. The overall effect of this is stunning. The picture is quite an asset to your beautiful poem. The poetry is exceptional in every respect, from word and topic choice to format to the love it is written with and the hope it gives others. This is a superior piece of work, one of the best I've ever read on this site and just know I would shower you with stars if I could.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much, Wendy for your kind words. Linda
Comment from rjuselius
aaawwww, this is such a sweetheart of a poem dear Linda! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem as it descr8bes the mindset of children.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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aaawwww, this is such a sweetheart of a poem dear Linda! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem as it descr8bes the mindset of children.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Thank you Rebekka for reading, sharing your thoughts with me and feeling this poem six star worthy. Linda
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Livelylinda,
Nice piece of poetry transparently depicting its theme.
Lucid and perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"no abuse, neglect, fears to face,
no predators around every corner
just innocent children feeling the sun's warmth
upon their blissful faces"
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Hello Livelylinda,
Nice piece of poetry transparently depicting its theme.
Lucid and perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"no abuse, neglect, fears to face,
no predators around every corner
just innocent children feeling the sun's warmth
upon their blissful faces"
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Thank you, RP for reading, your kind words of praise and feeling that this poem is six star worthy. Linda
Comment from Gloria ....
First off Linda, I love your title, Children of the Meadow because yes I, like many children do remember how glorious meadows are.
This is a most soothing poem and how nice it would be for wee ones to feel safe.
A most enjoyable read and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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First off Linda, I love your title, Children of the Meadow because yes I, like many children do remember how glorious meadows are.
This is a most soothing poem and how nice it would be for wee ones to feel safe.
A most enjoyable read and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Linda
