Sing out loud
Rejoicing17 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a cool poem and Picasso-style picture. I like the exuberance of the call to sing about the good things we enjoy about life and to do it all together so we can share in the joy!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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What a cool poem and Picasso-style picture. I like the exuberance of the call to sing about the good things we enjoy about life and to do it all together so we can share in the joy!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thanks Helen. So glad you like it. Jen.
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your contest entry; short and sweet with a message to be happy. It takes more muscles to frown than it does to laugh. Unfortunately, the World is in so much turmoil with weather changes and all sorts of murder and mayhem. It is hard to find pleasure in life, we must try and get away from all the strife.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Good luck with your contest entry; short and sweet with a message to be happy. It takes more muscles to frown than it does to laugh. Unfortunately, the World is in so much turmoil with weather changes and all sorts of murder and mayhem. It is hard to find pleasure in life, we must try and get away from all the strife.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thanks. So glad you like it. Jen.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Jen.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the positive vibe
in your poem, and the
cheery artwork goes with it.
-Thanks for highlighting
singing out loud about
"pleasures in life."
-More people need to try it!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Jen.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the positive vibe
in your poem, and the
cheery artwork goes with it.
-Thanks for highlighting
singing out loud about
"pleasures in life."
-More people need to try it!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Many thanks Pam. So glad you liked it. Jen.
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You are welcome, Jen.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem we need to sing out loud together more often that builds great relationships between the singers that keep them together for life.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem we need to sing out loud together more often that builds great relationships between the singers that keep them together for life.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks. So glad you like it. Jen. X
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Love the sentiment of the poem. Too often we talk about the negative in life; just watch any news program for ten minutes. It's important for an individual to practice the positive, more important for society to do it together. Excellent. Love the picture with this. Hugh
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Love the sentiment of the poem. Too often we talk about the negative in life; just watch any news program for ten minutes. It's important for an individual to practice the positive, more important for society to do it together. Excellent. Love the picture with this. Hugh
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks. So glad you like it. Jen.
Comment from Heather Knight
I like how cheerful your poem is. The artwork reminds me of Picasso's paintings. It's so very similar.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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I like how cheerful your poem is. The artwork reminds me of Picasso's paintings. It's so very similar.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks. So glad you like it. Jen. X
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is wonderful! So uplifting and positive! So everything The News is not! Thank you for this absolutely delightful highlight in my day. I hope this poem soars right to the top! (And I can't believe you found the absolute PERFECT graphic for it!!) Good work on everything! xo
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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This is wonderful! So uplifting and positive! So everything The News is not! Thank you for this absolutely delightful highlight in my day. I hope this poem soars right to the top! (And I can't believe you found the absolute PERFECT graphic for it!!) Good work on everything! xo
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks. So glad you like it. Jen. X
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Love it!
