The Dream
The morning after.....66 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were clear, conveyed love and gentleness. The
music was just beautiful as I pondered on this poem. The artwork
was perfect and compliments this poem well. The poem flows and
connects smoothly.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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The author's words were clear, conveyed love and gentleness. The
music was just beautiful as I pondered on this poem. The artwork
was perfect and compliments this poem well. The poem flows and
connects smoothly.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your appreciative feedback! It means so much to know you enjoyed it! xoxo
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
A lovely, rhyming poem, Diana. I also like the art work, by Far From Average 735k View.
About a week ago, you awarded me a splendid review of my post. I feared I had exhausted my limit on the monthly nomination for best reviewer. Sorry about that.
Don
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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A lovely, rhyming poem, Diana. I also like the art work, by Far From Average 735k View.
About a week ago, you awarded me a splendid review of my post. I feared I had exhausted my limit on the monthly nomination for best reviewer. Sorry about that.
Don
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the thought, but the review is sincere and not about a nomination. No one ever has any-i?m Out as well. But I sincerely appreciate you took time to read and enjoy this work. Your supportive feedback has made my day! xoxo
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a well=written poem with a rhyme scheme that works. I especially like the last stanza. While the poem is romantic it is not overdone. The sweetness is restrained. Good job!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This is a well=written poem with a rhyme scheme that works. I especially like the last stanza. While the poem is romantic it is not overdone. The sweetness is restrained. Good job!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! Your supportive feedback brings joy to my heart for this is my favorite of my work! xoxo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem is not only skillfully-written; it's sweet, romantic, and sexy--
a love poem that has it all! As your poem implies, love is about more than sex; it's about listening, tenderness, and caring.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This poem is not only skillfully-written; it's sweet, romantic, and sexy--
a love poem that has it all! As your poem implies, love is about more than sex; it's about listening, tenderness, and caring.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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You?re awesome! So happy you enjoyed! I believe sex is the last aspect when it comes to really honest living relationship. It?s something that happens because of not vice verse! Appreciate your encouraging feedback! xoxo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is beautiful, romantic, and passionate. Intense feelings and emotions can be felt in this. I love the very descriptive wording you've used and the seamless rhyme and flow. I really enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done Diana!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This is beautiful, romantic, and passionate. Intense feelings and emotions can be felt in this. I love the very descriptive wording you've used and the seamless rhyme and flow. I really enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done Diana!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Jeff!! I think it is my favorite of my work. I sincerely appreciate you encouraging feedback! xoxo
Comment from Neonewman
The artwork and music pair incredibly well with this brilliant rhyming piece you have offered. I feel this one should win the contest, best I've seen thus far.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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The artwork and music pair incredibly well with this brilliant rhyming piece you have offered. I feel this one should win the contest, best I've seen thus far.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! This is my favorite of all of my work. Appreciate your encouraging comment sincerely! xoxo
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My pleasure.
Comment from Sally Law
Boy, I am sicker than I thought otherwise I wouldn't have missed this. Never mind, it was before I fanned you. Whew, I thought I was losing it. A sweet poem full of longing and a full package with a Yanni song. I'm in repose this afternoon with this.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Boy, I am sicker than I thought otherwise I wouldn't have missed this. Never mind, it was before I fanned you. Whew, I thought I was losing it. A sweet poem full of longing and a full package with a Yanni song. I'm in repose this afternoon with this.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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haha!! You are too funny! yes, it was like my second post when I joined. Just been waiting for the contest to finally roll around. I got a good rating for all time best, but its dropped a bit since I first posted, so wanted to try to get it back up there! :) It is my favorite yet by far, and so glad you liked it! repose my dear, repose!! xoxoxo
Comment from Raul1
I hope that you win the Rhyming contest. It has a chance of winning it. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I hope that you win the Rhyming contest. It has a chance of winning it. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! This is one of the first poems i posted when I joined and i have been waiting a while for this contest to finally make its way to the deadline! LOL!! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
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You're welcome.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Diana, a wonderful wednesday to you. I enjoyed your poem, I enjoyed the rhythm an rhyme of it and the words, so heartfelt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hello Diana, a wonderful wednesday to you. I enjoyed your poem, I enjoyed the rhythm an rhyme of it and the words, so heartfelt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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And happy Wednesday to you also!! i appreciate you stopped and enjoyed this work. it is one of my favorites for sure! :) xoxo
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Very beautiful and the music and picture are wonderful assets your lovely poem. It carries the reader away with the one gift we give ourselves--to love.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Very beautiful and the music and picture are wonderful assets your lovely poem. It carries the reader away with the one gift we give ourselves--to love.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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thank you for you heartfelt review! it is probably my favorite of all i have written. Been waiting a while for this contest to finally get here! :) xoxo
